Thanks James
http://codereview.appspot.com/4126042/diff/5002/Documentation/notation/pitches.itely File Documentation/notation/pitches.itely (right): http://codereview.appspot.com/4126042/diff/5002/Documentation/notation/pitches.itely#newcode828 Documentation/notation/pitches.itely:828: Lilypond provides functions for applying these transformations. On 2011/02/03 10:14:47, pkx166h wrote:
Do we need this last sentence 'Lilypond provides..'.
No. Deleted. http://codereview.appspot.com/4126042/diff/5002/Documentation/notation/pitches.itely#newcode862 Documentation/notation/pitches.itely:862: @end lilypond On 2011/02/03 10:14:47, pkx166h wrote:
do we need the '\score' and/or '\new Staff' between the @Lilypond and @end Lilypond constructs?
Yes. It's the same with \transpose. http://codereview.appspot.com/4126042/diff/5002/Documentation/notation/pitches.itely#newcode868 Documentation/notation/pitches.itely:868: motif = \relative c' { ees8 des ges,4 <ges' bes,> <ges bes,>} On 2011/02/03 10:14:47, pkx166h wrote:
need a space before the closing '}'
Done. http://codereview.appspot.com/4126042/diff/5002/Documentation/notation/pitches.itely#newcode912 Documentation/notation/pitches.itely:912: opposite direction: On 2011/02/03 10:14:47, pkx166h wrote:
I had to read this a few times for to make sense to me, so how about instead:
Done http://codereview.appspot.com/4126042/diff/5002/Documentation/notation/pitches.itely#newcode953 Documentation/notation/pitches.itely:953: The combined operation of inversion and retrograde produce the On 2011/02/03 10:14:47, pkx166h wrote:
The combined operation of @code{inversion} and @code{retrograde} ...
No. These are not code items. If anything they might be @notation{}, but we don't do that for every musical term every time it is used, only the first time in a section. http://codereview.appspot.com/4126042/ _______________________________________________ lilypond-devel mailing list lilypond-devel@gnu.org http://lists.gnu.org/mailman/listinfo/lilypond-devel