Hi Francisco,

On Sat, Oct 25, 2008 at 2:06 PM, Francisco Vila <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
> It's me, or aren't  there too many adjacent parenthesized phrases in
> the Doc main page? I suggest to remove them in the second one in every
> section, something like changing
>
> #  Learning Manual (in one big page ~ 1.5 MB, in PDF)
> (start here)
>
> to
>
> #  Learning Manual (in one big page ~ 1.5 MB, in PDF)
> Start here. <!-- This could be in a smaller typeface -->

I think the parentheses are okay, but I think the information can be
shuffled a little bit.  Something like

Learning Manual (start here)
- in one big page (~ 1.5MB) and PDF

would be better, IMO.


Patrick


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