Dear developers, One of my suggestions involves some shuffling around of parts, so I'll first define into which parts I divide section 7.3.9. Section 7.3.9 currently contains 4 topics: (1) adding stanza numbers from "Stanza numbers can be added" to "start of first syllable." (2) printing stanzas at the end from "Sometimes it is appropriate" to a snippet of Mary had a Little Lamb (3) adding singer names from "Names of singers can" to a snippet where Ernie sings "je t'aime" (4) printing stanzas at the end in side-to-side columns from "When a piece of music" to a snippet ending in "This is verse five. It has two lines"
[A] In the last line of topic one, "just before the start of first syllable." is missing a "the". It should read "just before the start of the first syllable." [B] I recommend swapping topic 2 and topic 3, since 3 and 4 are about similar issues: about printing stanzas at the end, and about printing stanzas at the end in columns next to each other. [C] I also hereby submit a paragraph + code describing how to put a dynamics marks in front of the stanza. I recommend putting it after topic 1, as both deal with \set stanza. I would have liked to explain why \set stanza must take place outside \lyricmode: unfortunately, I don't know myself. All I know is that you get the error message "Unexpected LYRIC_MARKUP". If you have an explanation, I think it would be good to add it. --start-- Stanzas differing in loudness are indicated by putting an appropriate dynamics mark before each stanza. In Lilypond, everthing coming in front of a stanza goes into the StanzaNumber object; dynamics marks are no different. For technical reasons, you have to set the stanza outside \lyricmode, like in the following example: text = { \set stanza = \markup { \dynamic "ff" "1. " } \lyricmode { Big bang } } << \new Voice = "tune" { \time 3/4 g'4 c'2 } \new Lyrics \lyricsto "tune" \text
--end-- (For whoever makes the docs: this snippet compiles. Just precede it with a \version and \layout { ragged-right = ##t }.) [D] Finally, I would add a "Bugs" section after the "See also" section, saying the following: --start-- Bugs When the stanza number becomes too wide, it just writes over whatever is to its left. --end-- So, the new "More about stanzas" section covers five topics, in the following order: (1) adding stanza numbers (2) adding dynamics marks (3) adding singer names (4) printing stanzas at the end (5) printing stanzas at the end in multiple columns ------- Two more questions: Firstly, do you think we should put the topics above into their own subsections: 7.3.9.1 - 7.3.9.5? Secondly: in my opinion, topic 5 (printing stanzas at the end in multiple colums) is more of a template than it describes new techniques. Perhaps it should be moved to the template appendix under section D.4 "Vocal Ensembles". What do you all think? Regards, Sietse Sietse Brouwer _______________________________________________ lilypond-devel mailing list lilypond-devel@gnu.org http://lists.gnu.org/mailman/listinfo/lilypond-devel