On Wed, Nov 01, 2006 at 08:44:13PM +0100, Han-Wen Nienhuys wrote: > Cameron Horsburgh escreveu: > >Hmm, I'm still not happy with the first sentence! How about: > > > >*** > > > >The initial inspiration for LilyPond came ten years ago when two > >musician friends grew disappointed with the bland and boring look of > >computer generated scores. > > > >*** > > I used formatted iso. generated. GEnerated sounds a bit nerdy. > Good > > > >Also, the comma after 'improvements' should be replaced by a semi-colon. > > rather a colon ? > Gah --- I'm always mixing those two up. You're right of course.
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