source/text/shared/guide/error_report.xhp |    8 +++++---
 source/text/shared/optionen/01010600.xhp  |    4 ++--
 2 files changed, 7 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

New commits:
commit 421ecbe5b8f35dc9a50ac6a329662231914132d4
Author:     Pierre F <f...@bger.ch>
AuthorDate: Fri Jul 12 15:57:14 2024 +0200
Commit:     Adolfo Jayme Barrientos <fit...@ubuntu.com>
CommitDate: Thu Jul 25 10:18:18 2024 +0200

    clarify + link. tdf#155459
    
    Change-Id: I422016b32edf3d2bf898eb5ef4b1651eb7ee7c0c
    Reviewed-on: https://gerrit.libreoffice.org/c/help/+/170360
    Reviewed-by: Adolfo Jayme Barrientos <fit...@ubuntu.com>
    Tested-by: Jenkins

diff --git a/source/text/shared/guide/error_report.xhp 
b/source/text/shared/guide/error_report.xhp
index 3956cdc221..623833394d 100644
--- a/source/text/shared/guide/error_report.xhp
+++ b/source/text/shared/guide/error_report.xhp
@@ -43,16 +43,18 @@
 
 <h2 id="hd_id3159399" xml-lang="en-US">Sending the Crash Report</h2>
 <paragraph role="paragraph" id="par_id711605615413339">Select the checkbox if 
you want to restart %PRODUCTNAME in safe mode. Then click the <widget>Send 
Crash Report</widget> button.</paragraph>
-<paragraph role="paragraph" id="par_id521605621252890">If a crash report is 
sent successfully, then a dialog box will provide a URL for the report. To see 
the report, copy the URL and paste into a webbrowser.</paragraph>
+<paragraph role="paragraph" id="par_id521605621252890">If a crash report is 
sent successfully, a dialog box will provide a URL for your report. To see the 
report, copy the URL and paste into a web browser.</paragraph>
 
 <tip id="par_id3149670" xml-lang="en-US">You will not get an answer to your 
crash report. If you need support, please visit <link 
href="https://www.libreoffice.org/get-help/community-support/";>Community 
Assistance</link> for an overview of different possibilities.</tip>
 
 <h2 id="hd_id3150792" xml-lang="en-US">What Data are Sent?</h2>
-<paragraph id="par_id3154366" role="paragraph" xml-lang="en-US">The crash 
report sends information about the error type that caused the crash and the 
process memory contents at the time of the crash.  The memory contents include: 
a list of loaded libraries and their version number; a list of the current 
threads with the contents of their stack memory and processor register states. 
The memory trace is gathered locally by standard system tools: 
<literal>dbghelp.dll</literal> on Windows systems; <literal>clone()</literal>, 
<literal>ptrace()</literal> and <literal>/proc</literal> directory on Linux 
systems; Apple's Crash Reporter on Mac systems.</paragraph>
+<paragraph id="par_id3154366" role="paragraph" xml-lang="en-US">The crash 
report sends information about the error type that caused the crash and the 
process memory contents at the time of the crash.  The memory contents include: 
a list of loaded libraries and their version number; a list of the current 
threads with the contents of their stack memory and processor register states. 
The memory trace is gathered locally by standard system tools: 
<literal>dbghelp.dll</literal> on Windows systems; <literal>clone()</literal>, 
<literal>ptrace()</literal> and <literal>/proc</literal> directory on Linux 
systems.</paragraph>
 
 <paragraph role="paragraph" id="par_id731607157836334">Information is also 
sent about the %PRODUCTNAME version, the operating system name and version, and 
the computing hardware (CPU type and features; total RAM memory size; graphics 
device and driver).</paragraph>
 
-<paragraph id="par_id3150504" role="paragraph" xml-lang="en-US">The crash 
report is anonymous. No identification information is sent and no document 
content is sent. The report data are sent as a multipart HTTP POST 
request.</paragraph>
+<tip id="par_id3150504" xml-lang="en-US">The crash report is anonymous. No 
identification information is sent and no document content is sent. The report 
data are sent as a multipart HTTP POST request. See also the <link 
href="https://www.libreoffice.org/about-us/privacy/privacy-policy-en/";>Privacy 
Policy - section 1.XI</link></tip>
+
+<paragraph role="paragraph" id="par_id711605615413001">Vendors like Ubuntu or 
Apple package their own crash reporter in their version of %PRODUCTNAME. No 
data is sent to The Document Foundation.</paragraph>
 </body>
 
 </helpdocument>
\ No newline at end of file
diff --git a/source/text/shared/optionen/01010600.xhp 
b/source/text/shared/optionen/01010600.xhp
index e03ab2e8a7..cd0beedecf 100644
--- a/source/text/shared/optionen/01010600.xhp
+++ b/source/text/shared/optionen/01010600.xhp
@@ -62,8 +62,8 @@
 </section>
 
 <h2 id="hd_id3163561">Help Improve %PRODUCTNAME</h2>
-<h3 id="hd_id3169299">Send crash reports to The Document Foundation</h3>
-<paragraph xml-lang="en-US" id="par_id3167530" role="paragraph"><ahelp 
hid="cui/ui/optgeneralpage/crashreport">Send crash reports to help developers 
improve the software’s reliability.</ahelp> Whenever %PRODUCTNAME crashes, you 
can opt to send reports containing certain debugging information, useful to 
help track down the cause of the bug and fix it eventually.</paragraph>
+<h3 id="hd_id3169299">Prompt for sending crash reports to The Document 
Foundation</h3>
+<paragraph xml-lang="en-US" id="par_id3167530" role="paragraph"><ahelp 
hid="cui/ui/optgeneralpage/crashreport">Ask you wether to send a crash report 
to help developers improve the software’s reliability.</ahelp> Whenever 
%PRODUCTNAME crashes, you can opt to send a <link 
href="text/shared/guide/error_report.xhp#hd_id3150792">report containing 
anonymous debugging information</link>, to help track down and eventually fix 
the root cause.</paragraph>
 <switch select="sys">
 <case select="WIN">
 <h2 id="hd_id111581845580821">%PRODUCTNAME Quickstarter</h2>

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