Peter Ennis wrote:
Version SVN-20050417
2. Audience
s/When installing a regular distribution, one is often forced to
install several programs which are probably never used./When
installing a regular distribution, one is often forced to include
several programs which are probably never used./
OK.
s/substantially smaller compared to most existing
setups./substantially smaller when compared to the majority of
existing installations./
OK.
s/truly bring./truly brings./
IMO, it reads better in its original form. "information and knowledge"
= plural, hence "bring" is the correct form of the verb (consider "it
brings" vs. "they bring").
3. Prerequisites
The Linux Users' Guide
http://espc22.murdoch.edu.au/~stewart/guide/guide.html
COULD NOT CONNECT
Thanks, updated to a working link.
4. Typography
I'm not sure either of your suggestions are necessary. Perhaps you
could explain why you thought they were?
Thanks,
Matt.
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