Peter Ennis wrote:
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s/(see the Section 1.3, “Resources” section of this book)/(see the Section 1.3. “Resources” section of this book)/
I find both the original and Peter's change to be poor grammar/structure. I would suggest one of the following:
s/(see the Section 1.3, “Resources” section of this book)/(see the "Section 1.3. Resources" section of this book)/
s/(see the Section 1.3, “Resources” section of this book)/(see Section 1.3, “Resources”, of this book)/
s/(see the Section 1.3, “Resources” section of this book)/(see Section 1.3 (“Resources”) of this book)/
Again though, don't weigh my suggestion too heavily: I'm a nobody. I haven't installed a LFS system myself yet, and I'm not an english teacher (but english is my first language).
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