Git commit 91798c295fda7cd2470a7b691fb67bc4cca5e54b by Jack Ostroff.
Committed on 01/07/2024 at 22:44.
Pushed by ostroffjh into branch 'Handbook-5.2'.

more cleanup

M  +5    -10   doc/details-database.docbook
M  +9    -11   doc/details-settings.docbook
M  +2    -2    doc/firsttime.docbook
M  +36   -33   doc/makemostof.docbook
M  +1    -1    doc/whatsnew.docbook

https://invent.kde.org/office/kmymoney/-/commit/91798c295fda7cd2470a7b691fb67bc4cca5e54b

diff --git a/doc/details-database.docbook b/doc/details-database.docbook
index c42ae8fb4c..fd04d8fe69 100644
--- a/doc/details-database.docbook
+++ b/doc/details-database.docbook
@@ -288,7 +288,7 @@
   these inter-table relationships.
 </para>
 
-<informaltable>
+<informaltable pgwide="1">
   <tgroup cols="3">
     <thead>
       <row>
@@ -422,18 +422,13 @@
   Notes:
 </para>
 
-<!-- FIXME:  can anyone explain why we should use these character codes?
-     &#x2013 en dash
-     &#x201C left double quote
-     &#x201D right double quote
--->
 <para>
-  1 &#x2013; txType = &#x201C;N&#x201D; for normal transactions,
-  &#x201C;S&#x201D; for scheduled transactions
+  1 &ndash; txType = "N&rdquor; for normal transactions, "S&rdquor; for 
scheduled
+  transactions
 </para>
 
 <para>
-2 &#x2013; if kmmAccounts.isStockAccount = &#x201C;Y&#x201D;
+  2 &ndash; if kmmAccounts.isStockAccount = "Y&rdquor;
 </para>
 </sect3>
 
@@ -539,7 +534,7 @@
   and click <guibutton>Create Tables</guibutton>.  Note that, except in the 
case of
   SQLite, you will need either to include a suitable <literal>CREATE
   DATABASE</literal> statement as the first command, or have previously issued 
such a
-  command externally to &kmymoney;.  <!-- FIXME:  to KMM or to the RDBMS? -->
+  command externally to &kmymoney;.
 </para>
 </sect3>
 
diff --git a/doc/details-settings.docbook b/doc/details-settings.docbook
index a2630d0abc..5d343f5717 100644
--- a/doc/details-settings.docbook
+++ b/doc/details-settings.docbook
@@ -44,8 +44,8 @@
   </mediaobject>
 </screenshot>
 
-<!-- FIXME: I prefer a more consistent hierarchy and use of levels on this 
page, such
-     as with use sectX and variablelist.  For now, I minimize changes. -->
+<!-- FIXME: I would prefer a more consistent hierarchy and use of levels here, 
such
+     as with using sectX and variablelist.  For now, I minimize layoue 
changes. -->
 <variablelist>
   <varlistentry>
     <term><guilabel>Autosave options</guilabel></term>
@@ -834,6 +834,7 @@
         </listitem>
         
         <listitem>
+          <!-- FIXME:  What happens if multiple transactions are within X%?  
-->
           <para>Same transaction if amount differs less than percentage set 
below</para>
           <para>
             With this option selected, when you enter a new transaction, 
&kmymoney;
@@ -847,7 +848,6 @@
             all previous transactions for the payee and account will be 
displayed,
             and you can select one of those transactions to use for autofill by
             clicking on it.
-            <!-- FIXME:  What happens if multiple transactions are within X%?  
-->
           </para>
         </listitem>
 
@@ -944,12 +944,10 @@
 </sect2>
 
 <sect2><title>Ungrouped Item</title>
-<!-- FIXME: This is a good example of problems with the current mix of sectX 
and
-     variablelist.  Without a title, this sect has inadequate spacing above 
it.  so
-     it looks like it is part of the previous group, but the actual title does 
not
-     match the lack of title in the actual config dialog.  I'm open to 
suggestions on
-     how to deal with this.  Not using sect2 for boxes might help, but would 
be a lot
-     of effort.  Perhaps just adding a box and title to the config dialog?  -->
+<!-- FIXME: This is a good example of problems with the current mix of sectX 
and variablelist.  Without a title, this
+     sect has inadequate spacing above.  so it looks part of the previous 
group, but the actual title doesn't match the
+     lack of title in the actual config dialog.  I'm open to suggestions on 
how to deal with this.  Not using sect2 for
+     boxes might help, but would be a lot of effort.  Perhaps just adding a 
box and title to the config dialog?-->
 <literallayout>
 </literallayout>
 <variablelist>
@@ -1258,9 +1256,9 @@
 </para>
 </sect2>
 
-<sect2 id="details.settings.plugins.kbanking"><title>KBanking</title>
 <!-- FIXME: There is some overlap between here and the Reference/Settings 
section.
-            Better coordination would be good. -->
+            I would prefer better coordination.  -->
+<sect2 id="details.settings.plugins.kbanking"><title>KBanking</title>
 
 <para>
   This plugin adds support for HBCI/FinTs, OFX, and PayPal online banking by 
using
diff --git a/doc/firsttime.docbook b/doc/firsttime.docbook
index bc5f728dc8..112045bfb7 100644
--- a/doc/firsttime.docbook
+++ b/doc/firsttime.docbook
@@ -11,13 +11,13 @@
 <title>Using &kmymoney; for the first time</title>
 
 <sect1 id="firstime"><title>Running &kmymoney; for the first time</title>
-<note>
+<note><title>Screenshots may differ</title>
   <para>
     When you run &kmymoney;, it might not look exactly like the screenshots in 
this
     manual.  Many details, such as fonts, colors, and icons, can be 
customized, using
     the <menuchoice><guimenu>Settings</guimenu><guimenuitem>Configure
     &kmymoney;...</guimenuitem></menuchoice> menu item or the &kde; 
&systemsettings;
-    application, depending on your operating system.
+    application, depending on your operating system or distribution.
   </para>
 </note>
 
diff --git a/doc/makemostof.docbook b/doc/makemostof.docbook
index a3dc3bd7e7..530a142394 100644
--- a/doc/makemostof.docbook
+++ b/doc/makemostof.docbook
@@ -27,10 +27,10 @@
   same as &kmymoney;'s will almost certainly save you time later.
 </para>
 
-<note>
+<note><title></title>
   <para>
-    This and the following sections have been essentially unchanged since a 
very
-    early version of &kmymoney;.  While the basics of bookkeeping have not 
changed
+    This and the following sections have been essentially unchanged since the 
very
+    early versions of &kmymoney;.  While the basics of bookkeeping have not 
changed
     over the years, and there is nothing inaccurate or misleading here, there 
have
     been requests to update this area.  If you have any specific suggestions 
or ideas
     for this, the author would like to hear from you, through one of the routes
@@ -120,8 +120,8 @@
 
 <para>
   Finally, consider if you want everything in one set of accounts, or two or
-  more. This may depend on the legal framework or just how you want to analyze
-  things. Each set of accounts would be handled separately.
+  more. This may depend on the legal framework where you live, or just how you 
want
+  to analyze things. Each set of accounts would be handled separately.
 </para>
 </sect2>
 
@@ -139,10 +139,10 @@
 
 <sect1 id="makingmostof.mapping"><title>Mapping your finances to 
&kmymoney;</title>
 <para>
-  So, collect your recent financial papers and see the following sections for 
more
-  information on how you can map your own finances to each of the different 
areas of
-  &kmymoney;.  Note that each of these sections below is presented in more 
detail in
-  later chapters of this handbook.
+  So, collect your recent financial papers and seeexplore the following 
sections for
+  more information on how you can map your own finances to each of the 
different
+  areas of &kmymoney;.  Note that each of these sections below is presented in 
more
+  detail in later chapters of this handbook.
 </para>
 
 <sect2 id="makingmostof.mapping.accounts"><title>Accounts</title>
@@ -152,7 +152,7 @@
   that you wish to monitor.  You generally create an account in &kmymoney; to
   represent each different account you have in <quote>real life,</quote> 
whether it
   is with a bank or other financial institution, or a store, or even just the 
cash in
-  your wallet.  There are several types of accounts available, to represent the
+  your wallet.  There are several types of accounts available, which represent
   different types of places your money may be.
 </para>
 
@@ -199,7 +199,8 @@
     <term>Cash</term>
     <listitem>
       <para>
-        Money in your pocket or your wallet.
+        Money in your pocket or your wallet or in a jar or box on the shelf or 
under
+        your bed.
       </para>
     </listitem>
   </varlistentry>
@@ -271,11 +272,11 @@
 
 <sect2 id="makingmostof.mapping.institutions"><title>Institutions</title>
 <para>
-  These represent financial institutions, such as banks or investment brokers. 
 They
-  can be used to group accounts, and can show the total value of all your 
accounts
-  within that institution.  These do not need to reflect actual organizations, 
but
-  are for your convenience in grouping your accounts, and their use is 
completely
-  optional.
+  These represent financial institutions, such as banks or stores or investment
+  brokers.  They can be used to group accounts, and can show the total value 
of all
+  your accounts within that institution.  These do not need to reflect actual
+  organizations, but are for your convenience in grouping your accounts.  
Their use
+  is completely optional.
 </para>
 </sect2>
 
@@ -318,12 +319,12 @@
 
 <sect2 id="makingmostof.mapping.payees"><title>Payees</title>
 <para>
-  A Payee (or Payor) represents someone or some group to which you pay money 
or which
+  A Payee (or Payer) represents someone or some group to which you pay money 
or which
   pays you money.  As with Tags, they are non-managed, and do not have a 
value.  They
   are primarily a convenience for being able to report how much money you have 
sent
   to someone or spent at a particular store.  These are optional for most
   transactions, but are required for Scheduled transactions, which are describe
-  below.  A transaction history, with category, can be shown for each payee.
+  below.  A transaction history, with categories, can be shown for each payee.
 </para>
 </sect2>
 
@@ -331,7 +332,8 @@
 <para>
   Where transactions occur on a regular basis, such as salary or utility 
bills, these
   can be set up against a Schedule.  Transactions are created from Schedules.
-  Scheduled transaction which are overdue can be shown on the home page.
+  Upcoming scheduled transaction as well as those which are overdue can be 
shown on
+  the home page.
 </para>
 </sect2>
 </sect1>
@@ -340,13 +342,14 @@
 <para>
   When you start &kmymoney;, the Home View, or Home Page, shows a high level 
overview
   of your finances.  It is divided into several sections, and you can 
customize which
-  are displayed.  Along the left, there are icons for each of the major Views. 
 Each one is used
-  by &kmymoney; to present a different type of data for entry or reveiw.
+  are displayed, and in what order.  Along the left, there are icons for each 
of the
+  major Views.  Each view is used by &kmymoney; to present a different type of 
data
+  for entry or reveiw.
 </para>
 
 <para>
   Unless you keep your money under your mattress or under the floorboards, you
-  probably make use of one or more institutions where you have accounts, which
+  probably make use of one or more institutions, where you have accounts, which
   may be in credit or debit. In order to familiarize yourself with the way
   &kmymoney; works, choose an account you want to track with &kmymoney; and
   select the <menuchoice><guimenu>File</guimenu><guimenuitem>New</guimenuitem>
@@ -367,7 +370,7 @@
 </para>
 
 <para>
-  To add other new transactions go to th Ledger view; you can add new payees 
and
+  To add other transactions go to th Ledger View; you can add new payees and
   categories while entering a transaction or by going to the Payees or 
Categories
   View before entering the transaction.
 </para>
@@ -375,7 +378,7 @@
 <para> 
   Depending on which option you chose when setting up the data file, you will
   probably find that the default Categories do not exactly match your needs; 
you can
-  easily delete ones you know you are never going to need and add others that 
you
+  easily delete ones you know you are never going to need and add others that 
you do
   need. But when you are entering a transaction, you only have to type a few 
letters
   of a category and &kmymoney; will offer you a dropdown list of the matching
   categories from which to choose.
@@ -430,14 +433,14 @@
 </para>
 
 <para>
-  When the first plugins were written, even though the source code was 
included with
-  the complete source code of &kmymoney;, not all &Linux; distributions 
included them
-  in the versions they compiled.  For some time, the handbook included 
instructions
-  for checking this and for compiling them yourself, if necessary.  At this 
point,
-  many of the basic features of &kmymoney; have been implemented as plugins, 
and they
-  are included by all distributions, as well as the &Windows;, &macOS;, and 
Appimage
-  versions distributed on the <ulink url="https://www.kmymoney.org";>&kmymoney; 
web
-  site</ulink>.
+  When the first plugins were written, even though their source code was 
included
+  with the complete source code of &kmymoney;, not all &Linux; distributions 
included
+  them in the versions they compiled.  For some time, the handbook included
+  instructions for checking this and for compiling them yourself, if 
necessary.  At
+  this point, many of the basic features of &kmymoney; have been implemented as
+  plugins, and they are included by all distributions, as well as the 
&Windows;,
+  &macOS;, Appimage, and other versions distributed on the <ulink
+  url="https://www.kmymoney.org";>&kmymoney; web site</ulink>.
 </para>
 
 <para>
@@ -447,7 +450,7 @@
 </para>
 
 <para>
-  If you wish to write your own plugin in order to implement a feature, such as
+  If you wish to write your own plugin in order to implement a new feature, 
such as
   importing or exporting data in a custom format, you should use one of the 
existing
   importer or exporter plugins as an example.  If you do so, please write to 
the
   developers' mailing list &devlist;, in case someone has already started a 
similar
diff --git a/doc/whatsnew.docbook b/doc/whatsnew.docbook
index 5a520e9ac2..64fd532477 100644
--- a/doc/whatsnew.docbook
+++ b/doc/whatsnew.docbook
@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@
 </para>
 
 <para>
-  The conversion from using the earlier &KDE; libraries to &kde-frameworks; was
+  The conversion from using the earlier &kde; libraries to &kde-frameworks; was
   essentially complete in the early 5.1.x releases, with much of that work 
behind the
   scenes and not directly visible to the end user.  The general look and feel 
should
   continue to remain stable, although some minor changes may be noticable.  In

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