Git commit 3b7174063969db41ad5ac28fed9b2001676e5d7c by Nate Graham, on behalf 
of Matthew Shoults.
Committed on 03/01/2023 at 16:00.
Pushed by ngraham into branch 'master'.

Improve annotations documentation

Fix errors, improve English style and grammar.

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https://invent.kde.org/graphics/okular/commit/3b7174063969db41ad5ac28fed9b2001676e5d7c

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@@ -86,7 +86,7 @@ Context menu actions like Rename Bookmarks etc.)
                <sect1 id="opening">
                        <title>Opening Files</title>
                        <para>
-                               To view any supported file in &okular;, select 
<menuchoice><guimenu>File</guimenu><guimenuitem>Open...</guimenuitem>
+                               To open any supported file in &okular;, select 
<menuchoice><guimenu>File</guimenu><guimenuitem>Open...</guimenuitem>
                                </menuchoice>, choose a supported file in the 
dialog and click <guibutton>Open</guibutton>.
                                Your file should now be displayed in the main 
window.
                        </para>
@@ -515,10 +515,11 @@ Context menu actions like Rename Bookmarks etc.)
                        </screenshot>
                        <para>&okular; has two different kind of 
annotations:</para>
                        <para>Text annotations like <guilabel>Yellow 
Highlighter</guilabel> and <guilabel>Black Underlining</guilabel>
-                       for files with text like &eg; &PDF;.</para>
-                     <para>Graphic annotations like <guilabel>Pop-up 
Note</guilabel>, <guilabel>Inline Note</guilabel>, <guilabel>Freehand 
Line</guilabel>, <guilabel>Highlighter</guilabel>, <guilabel>Straight 
Line</guilabel>, <guilabel>Polygon</guilabel>, <guilabel>Stamp</guilabel>, 
<guilabel>Underline</guilabel>, <guilabel>Ellipse</guilabel>, and 
<guilabel>Typewriter</guilabel> for all formats supported by &okular;.</para>
-                       <para>Using the context menu either in the 
<guilabel>Annotations</guilabel> view of the sidebar or in the main window you 
can open a <guilabel>Pop up Note</guilabel> for any kind of annotation and add 
or edit comments.</para>
-                       <para>Annotations are not only limited to &PDF; files, 
they can be used for any format &okular; supports.</para>
+                       can be used with files containing text (&eg; 
&PDF;).</para>
+                     <para>Graphic annotations like <guilabel>Pop-up 
Note</guilabel>, <guilabel>Inline Note</guilabel>, <guilabel>Freehand 
Line</guilabel>, <guilabel>Highlighter</guilabel>, <guilabel>Straight 
Line</guilabel>, <guilabel>Polygon</guilabel>, <guilabel>Stamp</guilabel>, 
<guilabel>Underline</guilabel>, <guilabel>Ellipse</guilabel>, and 
<guilabel>Typewriter</guilabel>.</para>
+                         <para>Graphic annotations are not limited to &PDF; 
files; they can be used for any format that &okular; supports.</para>
+                       <para>Using the <guilabel>Annotations</guilabel> menu, 
you can add a <guilabel>Pop up Note</guilabel> or any other kind of annotation 
to add or edit comments.</para>
+
                        <para>
                 &okular; has the "document archiving" feature. This is an 
&okular;-specific format for carrying the document plus various metadata 
related to it (currently only annotations). You can save a "document archive" 
from the open document by choosing 
<menuchoice><guimenu>File</guimenu><guisubmenu>Save 
As</guisubmenu></menuchoice> and selecting <guilabel>Okular document 
archive</guilabel> in the <guilabel>Filter</guilabel> selector. Documents saved 
this way will get <filename>.okular</filename> as their filename extension. To 
open an &okular; document archive, just open it with &okular; as it would be 
&eg; a &PDF; document.
                        </para>
@@ -527,29 +528,28 @@ Context menu actions like Rename Bookmarks etc.)
                        </para>
                                <note>
                                        <para>
-                                               Due to DRM limitations 
(typically with &PDF; documents), adding, editing some properties
-                                               or removing annotations could 
not be possible.
+                                               Note that adding, editing, or 
removing annotations may not be possible with DRM-enabled files.
                                        </para>
                                </note>
                                <note>
                                  <para>
-                                   Any action on annotations (creation and 
removal of annotations, editing arbitrary annotation properties, relocating 
annotations with &Ctrl;+drag, and editing the text contents of an annotation) 
can be <link linkend="edit-undo">undone</link> or <link 
linkend="edit-redo">redone</link> using the corresponding item from the 
<guimenu>Edit</guimenu> menu. It is also possible to undo the action by 
pressing <keycombo>&Ctrl;<keycap>Z</keycap></keycombo> and redo the undone 
action by pressing <keycombo>&Ctrl;&Shift;<keycap>Z</keycap></keycombo>.
+                                   It is possible to <link 
linkend="edit-undo">undo</link> or <link linkend="edit-redo">redo</link> any 
annotation action by using the corresponding item from the 
<guimenu>Edit</guimenu> menu. It is also possible to undo the action by 
pressing <keycombo>&Ctrl;<keycap>Z</keycap></keycombo> and to redo a previously 
undone action by pressing <keycombo>&Ctrl;&Shift;<keycap>Z</keycap></keycombo>.
                                  </para>
                                </note>
                        <para>
-                         You can configure the default properties and 
appearance of each annotating tool. Please refer to the <link 
linkend="configannotations">corresponding section in this documentation</link>.
+                         You can configure the default properties and 
appearance of each annotation tool. Please refer to the <link 
linkend="configannotations">corresponding section in this documentation</link>.
                        </para>
                        <sect2 id="annotations-add">
                                <title>Adding annotations</title>
                                <para>
-                                       To add some annotations to the 
document, you have to use <guilabel>Quick Annotations</guilabel> button on the 
main &okular; toolbar or activate the annotating toolbar.
+                                       To add annotations to the document, you 
can use <guilabel>Quick Annotations</guilabel> button on the main &okular; 
toolbar, or activate the annotation toolbar.
                                        This is done by either selecting
                                        
<menuchoice><guimenu>Tools</guimenu><guimenuitem>Annotations</guimenuitem></menuchoice>
 or
-                                       pressing <keycap>F6</keycap>. Once the 
annotating toolbar is shown, just press one of
-                                       its buttons or use keyboard shortcuts 
(keys from <keycap>1</keycap> to <keycap>9</keycap>) to start constructing that 
annotation.
+                                       pressing <keycap>F6</keycap>. Once the 
annotation toolbar is shown, just press one of
+                                       its buttons or use keyboard shortcuts 
(keys from <keycap>1</keycap> to <keycap>9</keycap>) to use that annotation.
                                </para>
                                <para>
-                                 The annotating toolbar helps you to make 
annotations with drawings, shapes, and text messages. You can use the 
annotating toolbar to mark up a document (&eg; add lines, ellipses, polygons, 
stamps, highlights, underlines &etc;). The table below describes exactly what 
the default set of annotating toolbar buttons does.
+                                 The annotation toolbar helps you to make 
annotations with drawings, shapes, and text messages. You can use the 
annotation toolbar to mark up a document (&eg; add lines, ellipses, polygons, 
stamps, highlights, underlines &etc;). The table below describes exactly what 
the default set of annotation toolbar buttons does.
                                </para>
                                <informaltable>
                                  <tgroup cols="3">
@@ -584,10 +584,10 @@ Context menu actions like Rename Bookmarks etc.)
                                        </entry>
                                        <entry>
                                          <para>
-                                           To highlight text in the document 
with some given background color.
+                                           Highlights text in the document 
with a given background color.
                                          </para>
                                          <para>
-                                           Click on the tool button, then 
click with the &LMB; and hold to place the beginning of the highlighted text 
snippet, then drag to highlight it.
+                                           Click on the tool button, then 
click with the &LMB; and drag to highlight a text snippet.
                                          </para>
                                          <para>
                           It is possible to define the 
<guilabel>Type</guilabel> (<guimenuitem>Highlight</guimenuitem>, 
<guimenuitem>Squiggle</guimenuitem>, <guimenuitem>Underline</guimenuitem> or 
<guimenuitem>Strike out</guimenuitem>), <guilabel>Color</guilabel>, and 
<guilabel>Opacity</guilabel> for the highlighter. Just right-click on the 
highlighted text and select the <guimenuitem>Properties</guimenuitem> menu item.
@@ -611,10 +611,10 @@ Context menu actions like Rename Bookmarks etc.)
                                        </entry>
                                        <entry>
                                          <para>
-                                           To underline some text.
+                                           Underlines text with a straight 
line.
                                          </para>
                                          <para>
-                                           Click on the tool button, then 
click with the &LMB; and hold to place the beginning of the underlined text 
snippet, then drag to underline it.
+                                           Click on the tool button, then 
click with the &LMB; and drag to underline a text snippet.
                                          </para>
                                          <para>
                           It is possible to define the 
<guilabel>Type</guilabel> (<guimenuitem>Highlight</guimenuitem>, 
<guimenuitem>Squiggle</guimenuitem>, <guimenuitem>Underline</guimenuitem> or 
<guimenuitem>Strike out</guimenuitem>), <guilabel>Color</guilabel>, and 
<guilabel>Opacity</guilabel> for the underline. Just right-click on the 
underlined text and select the <guimenuitem>Properties</guimenuitem> menu item.
@@ -638,10 +638,10 @@ Context menu actions like Rename Bookmarks etc.)
                                        </entry>
                                        <entry>
                                          <para>
-                                           To underline some text by a 
squiggle line.
+                                           Underlines text with a squiggly 
line.
                                          </para>
                                          <para>
-                                           Click on the tool button, then 
click with the &LMB; and hold to place the beginning of the underlined text 
snippet, then drag to underline it.
+                                           Click on the tool button, then 
click with the &LMB; and drag to squiggly underline a text snippet.
                                          </para>
                                          <para>
                           It is possible to define the 
<guilabel>Type</guilabel> (<guimenuitem>Highlight</guimenuitem>, 
<guimenuitem>Squiggle</guimenuitem>, <guimenuitem>Underline</guimenuitem> or 
<guimenuitem>Strike out</guimenuitem>), <guilabel>Color</guilabel>, and 
<guilabel>Opacity</guilabel> for the underline. Just right-click on the 
underlined text and select the <guimenuitem>Properties</guimenuitem> menu item.
@@ -665,10 +665,10 @@ Context menu actions like Rename Bookmarks etc.)
                                        </entry>
                                        <entry>
                                          <para>
-                                           To strike out some text.
+                                               Strikes out some text.
                                          </para>
                                          <para>
-                                           Click on the tool button, then 
click with the &LMB; and hold to place the beginning of the underlined text 
snippet, then drag to underline it.
+                                           Click on the tool button, then 
click with the &LMB; and drag to squiggly strike out a text snippet.
                                          </para>
                                          <para>
                           It is possible to define the 
<guilabel>Type</guilabel> (<guimenuitem>Highlight</guimenuitem>, 
<guimenuitem>Squiggle</guimenuitem>, <guimenuitem>Underline</guimenuitem> or 
<guimenuitem>Strike out</guimenuitem>), <guilabel>Color</guilabel>, and 
<guilabel>Opacity</guilabel> for the underline. Just right-click on the 
underlined text and select the <guimenuitem>Properties</guimenuitem> menu item.
@@ -692,10 +692,10 @@ Context menu actions like Rename Bookmarks etc.)
                                        </entry>
                                        <entry>
                                          <para>
-                                           Typewriter features opaque letters 
on transparent background, so that it is useful to fill noninteractive forms.
+                                           Adds text on a transparent 
background. This is useful for filling out forms lacking integrated editable 
text fields.
                                          </para>
                                          <para>
-                                           Click on the tool button, then 
click with the &LMB; and hold to place the top-left corner of the note, then 
drag to place the bottom-right one. Enter the text of the note then click on 
the <guibutton>OK</guibutton> to save the note, <guibutton>Cancel</guibutton> 
to cancel note entering or <guibutton>Clear</guibutton> to clear the note.
+                                           Click on the tool button, then 
click with the &LMB; where you wish to add the top-left corner of the text, 
then drag to place the bottom-right one. Type some text, then click on the 
<guibutton>OK</guibutton> to save it, <guibutton>Clear</guibutton> to clear the 
text and start over, or <guibutton>Cancel</guibutton> to cancel.
                                          </para>
                                          <para>
                           It is possible to define the 
<guilabel>Font</guilabel> and <guilabel>Text color</guilabel> for the text. 
Just right-click on the typewriter text created and select the 
<guimenuitem>Properties</guimenuitem> menu item.
@@ -719,10 +719,10 @@ Context menu actions like Rename Bookmarks etc.)
                                        </entry>
                                        <entry>
                                          <para>
-                                           To draw inline note. The note will 
be shown inline as is.
+                                           Draws an inline note. The note will 
be shown inline as is.
                                          </para>
                                          <para>
-                                           Click on the tool button, then 
click with the &LMB; and hold to place the top-left corner of the note, then 
drag to place the bottom-right one. Enter the text of the note then click on 
the <guibutton>OK</guibutton> to save the note, <guibutton>Cancel</guibutton> 
to cancel note entering or <guibutton>Clear</guibutton> to clear the note.
+                                           Click on the tool button, then 
click with the &LMB; where you wish to add the top-left corner of the note, 
then drag to place the bottom-right one. Enter the text of the note then click 
on the <guibutton>OK</guibutton> to save the note, <guibutton>Clear</guibutton> 
to clear the note's text, or <guibutton>Cancel</guibutton> to cancel note 
creation.
                                          </para>
                                          <para>
                           It is possible to define the 
<guilabel>Color</guilabel>, <guilabel>Opacity</guilabel>, 
<guilabel>Font</guilabel>, <guilabel>Align</guilabel>, and <guilabel>Border 
width</guilabel> for the note. Just right-click on the note icon created and 
select the <guimenuitem>Properties</guimenuitem> menu item.
@@ -746,7 +746,7 @@ Context menu actions like Rename Bookmarks etc.)
                                        </entry>
                                        <entry>
                                          <para>
-                                           To draw multiline note. The note 
will can be viewed by double clicking on an icon in the document.
+                                           Draws a multiline note. The note 
can be viewed by double clicking on the icon created in the document.
                                          </para>
                                          <para>
                                            Click on the tool button, then 
click on the place in the document where the pop-up note should be added. Enter 
the text of pop-up note then click on the <guilabel>Close this note</guilabel> 
button in the top right corner of the pop-up window.
@@ -773,10 +773,10 @@ Context menu actions like Rename Bookmarks etc.)
                                        </entry>
                                        <entry>
                                          <para>
-                                           To draw free-form lines.
+                                           Draws free-form lines.
                                          </para>
                                          <para>
-                                           Click on the tool button, then 
click with the &LMB; and hold to place the start of the line, then drag to draw 
the line.
+                                           Click on the tool button, then 
click with the &LMB; and drag to draw the line.
                                          </para>
                                          <para>
                           It is possible to define the 
<guilabel>Color</guilabel>, <guilabel>Opacity</guilabel>, and 
<guilabel>Width</guilabel> for the line. Just right-click on the line created 
and select the <guimenuitem>Properties</guimenuitem> menu item.
@@ -800,10 +800,10 @@ Context menu actions like Rename Bookmarks etc.)
                                        </entry>
                                        <entry>
                                          <para>
-                                           To mark with an arrow.
+                                           Draws an arrow between two points.
                                          </para>
                                          <para>
-                                           Click on the tool button, then 
click with the &LMB; to place the starting point of the line, then drag to 
place of the ending point of the line should be and click once more.
+                                           Click on the tool button, then 
click with the &LMB; to place the starting point of the arrow, then drag to 
place the ending point of the line and click once more.
                                          </para>
                                          <para>
                           It is possible to define the 
<guilabel>Color</guilabel>, <guilabel>Opacity</guilabel>, 
<guilabel>Width</guilabel>, <guilabel>Line start</guilabel>, <guilabel>Line 
end</guilabel>, <guilabel>Leader line length</guilabel>, and <guilabel>Leader 
line extension length</guilabel> for the line. Just right-click on the line 
created and select the <guimenuitem>Properties</guimenuitem> menu item.
@@ -827,10 +827,10 @@ Context menu actions like Rename Bookmarks etc.)
                                        </entry>
                                        <entry>
                                          <para>
-                                           To mark with a line.
+                                               Draws a line between two points.
                                          </para>
                                          <para>
-                                           Click on the tool button, then 
click with the &LMB; to place the starting point of the line, then drag to 
place of the ending point of the line should be and click once more.
+                                           Click on the tool button, then 
click with the &LMB; to place the starting point of the line, then drag to 
place the ending point of the line and click once more.
                                          </para>
                                          <para>
                           It is possible to define the 
<guilabel>Color</guilabel>, <guilabel>Opacity</guilabel>, 
<guilabel>Width</guilabel>, <guilabel>Line start</guilabel>, <guilabel>Line 
end</guilabel>, <guilabel>Leader line length</guilabel>, and <guilabel>Leader 
line extension length</guilabel> for the line. Just right-click on the line 
created and select the <guimenuitem>Properties</guimenuitem> menu item.
@@ -854,10 +854,10 @@ Context menu actions like Rename Bookmarks etc.)
                                        </entry>
                                        <entry>
                                          <para>
-                                           To draw a rectangle around some 
chosen area.
+                                           Draws a rectangle around the chosen 
area.
                                          </para>
                                          <para>
-                                           Click on the tool button, then 
click with the &LMB; and hold to place the top-left corner of the rectangle, 
then drag to place the bottom-right one.
+                                           Click on the tool button, then 
click with the &LMB; to place the top-left corner of the rectangle, then drag 
to place the bottom-right one.
                                          </para>
                                          <para>
                           It is possible to define the 
<guilabel>Type</guilabel> (<guimenuitem>Rectangle</guimenuitem> or 
<guimenuitem>Ellipse</guimenuitem>), <guilabel>Color</guilabel>, 
<guilabel>Opacity</guilabel>, <guilabel>Shape fill</guilabel> (and its color), 
and <guilabel>Width</guilabel> for the border. Just right-click on the border 
created and select the <guimenuitem>Properties</guimenuitem> menu item.
@@ -881,10 +881,10 @@ Context menu actions like Rename Bookmarks etc.)
                                        </entry>
                                        <entry>
                                          <para>
-                                           To draw an ellipse or rectangle 
around some chosen area.
+                                           Draws an ellipse or rectangle 
around a chosen area.
                                          </para>
                                          <para>
-                                           Click on the tool button, then 
click with the &LMB; and hold to place the top-left corner of the circumscribed 
rectangular for the ellipse, then drag to place the bottom-right one.
+                                           Click on the tool button, then 
click with the &LMB; and hold to place the top-left corner of the circumscribed 
rectangle for the ellipse, then drag to place the bottom-right one.
                                          </para>
                                          <para>
                           It is possible to define the 
<guilabel>Type</guilabel> (<guimenuitem>Rectangle</guimenuitem> or 
<guimenuitem>Ellipse</guimenuitem>), <guilabel>Color</guilabel>, 
<guilabel>Opacity</guilabel>, <guilabel>Shape fill</guilabel> (and its color), 
and <guilabel>Width</guilabel> for the border. Just right-click on the border 
created and select the <guimenuitem>Properties</guimenuitem> menu item.
@@ -908,10 +908,10 @@ Context menu actions like Rename Bookmarks etc.)
                                        </entry>
                                        <entry>
                                          <para>
-                                           To draw a closed plane figure from 
three or more segments. The corresponding note can be viewed by double clicking 
inside the polygon.
+                                           Draws a closed shape from three or 
more line segments. The corresponding note can be viewed by double clicking 
inside the polygon.
                                          </para>
                                          <para>
-                                           Click on the tool button, then 
click with the &LMB; to place the first vertex of the polygon, then drag to 
place of the second vertex. Proceed until you draw the whole polygon up to the 
first vertex. Click twice if you want to add some note to the polygon.  Enter 
the text of the note then click on the <guibutton>OK</guibutton> to save the 
note, <guibutton>Cancel</guibutton> to cancel note entering or 
<guibutton>Clear</guibutton> to clear the note.
+                                           Click on the tool button, then 
click with the &LMB; to place the first vertex of the polygon, then drag to 
place of the second vertex. Proceed until you have drawn the whole polygon and 
connected back up with the first vertex. Click twice to add a note to the 
polygon.  Enter the text of the note then click on the 
<guibutton>OK</guibutton> to save the note, <guibutton>Clear</guibutton> to 
clear the note, or <guibutton>Cancel</guibutton> to cancel note entry.
                                          </para>
                                          <para>
                           It is possible to define the 
<guilabel>Color</guilabel>, <guilabel>Opacity</guilabel>, <guilabel>Shape 
fill</guilabel> (and its color), and <guilabel>Width</guilabel> for the 
polygon. Just right-click on the polygon created and select the 
<guimenuitem>Properties</guimenuitem> menu item.
@@ -935,7 +935,7 @@ Context menu actions like Rename Bookmarks etc.)
                                        </entry>
                                        <entry>
                                          <para>
-                                           To mark the text or image with some 
predefined shape.
+                                           Inserts a pre-defined shape into 
the document.
                                          </para>
                                          <para>
                                            Click on the tool button to choose 
the stamp from the drop-down list then click with the &LMB; to place the stamp.
@@ -962,11 +962,11 @@ Context menu actions like Rename Bookmarks etc.)
                                   </para>
                                   <note>
                                       <para>
-                                          It is possible to add &latex; code 
into the text of annotations. Please add 
<userinput>$$<replaceable>code</replaceable>$$</userinput> to the text of 
annotation, where <replaceable>code</replaceable> is any valid &latex; 
equation, and follow instructions on the screen to make it render by a &latex; 
distribution installed in your system.
+                                          It is possible to add &latex; code 
into the text of annotations. To do so, add 
<userinput>$$<replaceable>code</replaceable>$$</userinput> into the text of 
annotation, where <replaceable>code</replaceable> is any valid &latex; 
equation. Follow the instructions that will appear on the screen to render it 
using a &latex; distribution installed in your system.
                                       </para>
                                   </note>
                                <para>
-                                 It is possible to configure the current tool 
options using the annotating toolbar itself. The table below describes exactly 
what the default set of annotating toolbar configuring buttons does.
+                                 It is possible to configure the selected tool 
using the annotation toolbar itself:
                                </para>
                                <informaltable>
                                  <tgroup cols="3">
@@ -1001,7 +1001,7 @@ Context menu actions like Rename Bookmarks etc.)
                                        </entry>
                                        <entry>
                                          <para>
-                                           Click on the tool button to choose 
the width from the drop-down list.
+                                           Click on this button to choose the 
width from the drop-down list.
                                          </para>
                                        </entry>
                                      </row>
@@ -1028,7 +1028,7 @@ Context menu actions like Rename Bookmarks etc.)
                                        </entry>
                                        <entry>
                                          <para>
-                                                 Click on the tool button to 
choose color of text or border of your annotation. You can chose one of the 
predefined colors or click on the <guimenuitem>Custom Color...</guimenuitem> 
item to open the color selection dialog.
+                                                 Click on this button to 
choose the color of the text or border of your annotation. You can chose one of 
the predefined colors or click on the <guimenuitem>Custom 
Color...</guimenuitem> item to open the color selection dialog.
                                          </para>
                                        </entry>
                                      </row>
@@ -1049,7 +1049,7 @@ Context menu actions like Rename Bookmarks etc.)
                                        </entry>
                                        <entry>
                                          <para>
-                                                 Click on the tool button to 
choose a fill color of your annotation. You can chose one of the predefined 
colors or click on the <guimenuitem>Custom Color...</guimenuitem> item to open 
the color selection dialog.
+                                                 Click on this button to 
choose the fill color of your annotation. You can chose one of the predefined 
colors or click on the <guimenuitem>Custom Color...</guimenuitem> item to open 
the color selection dialog.
                                          </para>
                                        </entry>
                                      </row>
@@ -1070,7 +1070,7 @@ Context menu actions like Rename Bookmarks etc.)
                                        </entry>
                                        <entry>
                                          <para>
-                                                 Click on the tool button to 
choose annotation level of opacity from the drop-down list 
(<guimenuitem>100%</guimenuitem> is for the opaque annotations).
+                                                 Click on this button to 
choose the opacity of your annotation from the drop-down list 
(<guimenuitem>100%</guimenuitem> creates opaque annotations).
                                          </para>
                                        </entry>
                                      </row>
@@ -1091,7 +1091,7 @@ Context menu actions like Rename Bookmarks etc.)
                                        </entry>
                                        <entry>
                                          <para>
-                                                 Click on the tool button to 
open the font selection dialog.
+                                                 Click on this button to open 
the font selection dialog.
                                          </para>
                                        </entry>
                                      </row>
@@ -1112,7 +1112,7 @@ Context menu actions like Rename Bookmarks etc.)
                                        </entry>
                                        <entry>
                                          <para>
-                                                 Click on the tool button to 
open the general configuration dialog for your annotation.
+                                                 Click on this button to open 
the general configuration dialog for your annotation.
                                          </para>
                                        </entry>
                                      </row>
@@ -1120,7 +1120,7 @@ Context menu actions like Rename Bookmarks etc.)
                                    </tgroup>
                                  </informaltable>
                                <para>
-                                 There are three additional utility buttons on 
the default annotating toolbar.
+                                 There are three additional utility buttons on 
the annotation toolbar:
                                </para>
                                <informaltable>
                                  <tgroup cols="2">
@@ -1151,7 +1151,7 @@ Context menu actions like Rename Bookmarks etc.)
                                          </para>
                                          <note>
                                                  <para>
-                                                         You can use the 
default shortcuts from <keycombo 
action="simul">&Alt;<keycap>9</keycap></keycombo> to <keycombo 
action="simul">&Alt;<keycap>0</keycap></keycombo> to select the quick 
annotation actions any time you like even with the annotating toolbar hidden.
+                                                         You can use the 
default shortcuts from <keycombo 
action="simul">&Alt;<keycap>9</keycap></keycombo> to <keycombo 
action="simul">&Alt;<keycap>0</keycap></keycombo> to select the quick 
annotation actions any time you like, even with the annotation toolbar hidden.
                                                  </para>
                                          </note>
                                        </entry>
@@ -1168,7 +1168,7 @@ Context menu actions like Rename Bookmarks etc.)
                                        </entry>
                                        <entry>
                                          <para>
-                                           When checked keep the current 
annotation tool active after use.
+                                           When checked, keep the current 
annotation tool active after use.
                                          </para>
                                        </entry>
                                      </row>
@@ -1184,7 +1184,7 @@ Context menu actions like Rename Bookmarks etc.)
                                        </entry>
                                        <entry>
                                          <para>
-                                           Hide the annotating toolbar.
+                                           Hide the annotation toolbar.
                                          </para>
                                        </entry>
                                      </row>
@@ -1199,39 +1199,33 @@ Context menu actions like Rename Bookmarks etc.)
                                </para>
                                <note>
                                        <para>
-                                               Activating the annotating 
toolbar will make you switch to the Browse Mode.
+                                               Activating the annotation 
toolbar will automatically switch to Browse Mode.
                                        </para>
                                </note>
                                <para>
-                                       You can stop the construction any time 
by pressing again on the button of the
-                                       annotation you are constructing, or by 
pressing the &Esc; key.
+                                       You can stop annotating any time by 
pressing the button of the
+                                       annotation you are using again, or by 
pressing the &Esc; key.
                                </para>
                                <para>
-                                       The newly constructed annotation will 
have as author the author you set in the
+                                       The newly created annotation will have 
the author you set in the
                                        <link 
linkend="configannotations"><guilabel>Annotations</guilabel> page</link> in 
&okular;s
-                                       configuration dialog. The 
<guilabel>Annotations</guilabel> page can also be used to configure the content 
of the annotating toolbar.
+                                       configuration dialog as its author. The 
<guilabel>Annotations</guilabel> page can also be used to configure the content 
of the annotations toolbar.
                                </para>
                        </sect2>
                        <sect2 id="annotations-remove">
                                <title>Removing annotations</title>
                                <para>
-                                       To remove an annotation, first ensure 
the Browse tool is selected 
(<menuchoice><guimenu>Tools</guimenu><guimenuitem>Browse</guimenuitem></menuchoice>)
 then just click on it with the &RMB;, and select
+                                       To remove an annotation, first select 
the Browse tool 
(<menuchoice><guimenu>Tools</guimenu><guimenuitem>Browse</guimenuitem></menuchoice>)
 then just click on it with the &RMB;, and select
                                        <guimenuitem>Delete</guimenuitem> or 
select an annotation using the &LMB; and press the &Del; key.
                                </para>
                                <para>
-                                       When removing the annotation, its 
window will be closed if open.
+                                       When removing the annotation, its 
window will be closed if it is open.
                                </para>
-                               <note>
-                                       <para>
-                                               This option could not be 
enabled because the document does not allow removing
-                                               annotations.
-                                       </para>
-                               </note>
                        </sect2>
                        <sect2 id="annotations-edit">
                                <title>Editing annotations</title>
                                <para>
-                                       To edit an annotation, first ensure the 
Browse tool is selected 
(<menuchoice><guimenu>Tools</guimenu><guimenuitem>Browse</guimenuitem></menuchoice>)
 then click on it with the &RMB; and select
+                                       To edit an annotation, first select the 
Browse tool 
(<menuchoice><guimenu>Tools</guimenu><guimenuitem>Browse</guimenuitem></menuchoice>)
 then click on an annotation with the &RMB; and select
                                        <guimenuitem>Properties</guimenuitem>. 
A dialog will appear with the general
                                        annotation settings (like color and 
opacity, author, &etc;) and the settings specific
                                        to that annotation type.
@@ -1257,12 +1251,11 @@ Context menu actions like Rename Bookmarks etc.)
                                        else on the annotation to move it.
                                        Pressing &Esc; or clicking an area 
outside the annotation cancels a selection.
                                </para>
-                               <para>Resizing is only applicable for 
annotation types Inline Note, Typewriter, Stamp and Ellipse.</para>
+                               <para>Resizing is only available for the Inline 
Note, Typewriter, Stamp and Ellipse annotation types.</para>
 
                                <note>
                                        <para>
-                                               Depending on the document 
permissions (typically with &PDF; documents), some options
-                                               can be disabled.
+                                               Some options may be disabled 
depending on the document's permissions (this typically only affects some &PDF; 
documents).
                                        </para>
                                </note>
                        </sect2>
@@ -2214,7 +2207,7 @@ Context menu actions like Rename Bookmarks etc.)
                                                </menuchoice>
                                        </term>
                                        <listitem>
-                                               <para><action>Open the 
annotating toolbar</action>. The annotating toolbar allows you to add
+                                               <para><action>Open the 
annotation toolbar</action>. The annotation toolbar allows you to add
                                                        annotations on the 
document you are reading. For more information, please see the
                                                        section about <link 
linkend="annotations">Annotations</link>.</para>
                                        </listitem>
@@ -2942,10 +2935,10 @@ Context menu actions like Rename Bookmarks etc.)
                                        <term><guilabel>Annotation 
tools</guilabel></term>
                                        <listitem>
                                          <para>
-                                           This pane is used to configure your 
<link linkend="annotations-add">annotating toolbar</link>.
+                                           This pane is used to configure your 
<link linkend="annotations-add">annotation toolbar</link>.
                                          </para>
                                          <para>
-                                           There are five buttons 
(<guibutton>Add</guibutton>, <guibutton>Edit</guibutton>, 
<guibutton>Remove</guibutton>, <guibutton>Move Up</guibutton>, <guibutton>Move 
Down</guibutton>) and a list box (which lists the contents of the current 
annotating toolbar) which are used to configure the toolbar.
+                                           There are five buttons 
(<guibutton>Add</guibutton>, <guibutton>Edit</guibutton>, 
<guibutton>Remove</guibutton>, <guibutton>Move Up</guibutton>, <guibutton>Move 
Down</guibutton>) and a list box (which lists the contents of the current 
annotation toolbar) which are used to configure the toolbar.
                                          </para>
                                          <para>
                                            If you need to add some tool button 
on the toolbar click on the <guibutton>Add</guibutton> button. You can choose 
the <guilabel>Name</guilabel>, the <guilabel>Type</guilabel> and the 
<guilabel>Appearance</guilabel> of the created tool.
@@ -2956,7 +2949,7 @@ Context menu actions like Rename Bookmarks etc.)
                                            </para>
                                          </note>
                                          <para>
-                                           Click on some item in the list box 
then click on the corresponding button at the right part of the page to edit, 
remove, move up or move down the item. The keyboard shortcut of the tool (keys 
from <keycap>1</keycap> to <keycap>9</keycap>) depends on its position in the 
list of annotating toolbar.
+                                           Click on some item in the list box 
then click on the corresponding button at the right part of the page to edit, 
remove, move up or move down the item. The keyboard shortcut of the tool (keys 
from <keycap>1</keycap> to <keycap>9</keycap>) depends on its position in the 
list of annotation toolbar.
                                          </para>
                                        </listitem>
                                </varlistentry>

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