Git commit 4da2a533f98d7d859598d3188d4d79b204149155 by Mike Morrison.
Committed on 02/12/2022 at 07:55.
Pushed by cgilles into branch 'master'.

Minor edits to chapter 1

M  +2    -2    digikam/intro-background.docbook
M  +1    -1    digikam/intro-camerasupport.docbook
M  +3    -3    digikam/intro-database.docbook
M  +6    -6    digikam/intro-firstrun.docbook
M  +5    -5    digikam/intro-imageformats.docbook
M  +4    -4    digikam/intro-movieformats.docbook

https://invent.kde.org/documentation/digikam-doc/commit/4da2a533f98d7d859598d3188d4d79b204149155

diff --git a/digikam/intro-background.docbook b/digikam/intro-background.docbook
index 809fd46..f140e53 100644
--- a/digikam/intro-background.docbook
+++ b/digikam/intro-background.docbook
@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@
         </para>
 
         <para>
-            An easy-to-use Camera interface is provided, that will connect to 
your digital camera and download photographs directly into &digikam; Albums. 
More than <ulink url="http://www.gphoto.org/proj/libgphoto2/support.php";>1000 
digital cameras</ulink> are supported by the gphoto2 library. Of course, any 
media or card reader supported by your operating system will interface with 
&digikam;.
+            An easy-to-use Camera interface is provided that will connect to 
your digital camera and download photographs directly into &digikam; Albums. 
More than <ulink url="http://www.gphoto.org/proj/libgphoto2/support.php";>1000 
digital cameras</ulink> are supported by the gphoto2 library. Of course, any 
media or card reader supported by your operating system will interface with 
&digikam;.
         </para>
 
         <para>
@@ -49,7 +49,7 @@
         </para>
 
         <para>
-            You can also visit the <ulink 
url="http://www.digikam.org";>&digikam; Home Page.</ulink> for news of new 
releases and other &digikam; related information.
+            You can also visit the <ulink 
url="http://www.digikam.org";>&digikam; Home Page</ulink> for news of new 
releases and other &digikam; related information.
         </para>
 
     </sect2>
diff --git a/digikam/intro-camerasupport.docbook 
b/digikam/intro-camerasupport.docbook
index 80a098c..8379d7e 100644
--- a/digikam/intro-camerasupport.docbook
+++ b/digikam/intro-camerasupport.docbook
@@ -14,7 +14,7 @@
     </note>
 
     <para>
-        An easy-to-use camera interface is provided, that will connect to your 
digital camera and download photographs directly into &digikam; Albums. More 
than <ulink url="http://www.gphoto.org/proj/libgphoto2/support.php";>1000 
digital cameras</ulink> are supported by the gphoto2 library. Of course, any 
media or card reader supported by your operating system will interface with 
&digikam;.
+        An easy-to-use camera interface is provided that will connect to your 
digital camera and download photographs directly into &digikam; Albums. More 
than <ulink url="http://www.gphoto.org/proj/libgphoto2/support.php";>1000 
digital cameras</ulink> are supported by the gphoto2 library. Of course, any 
media or card reader supported by your operating system will interface with 
&digikam;.
     </para>
 
     <para>
diff --git a/digikam/intro-database.docbook b/digikam/intro-database.docbook
index 2d63dcc..cc25adb 100644
--- a/digikam/intro-database.docbook
+++ b/digikam/intro-database.docbook
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
         <title>Introduction</title>
 
         <para>
-           Everyone knows about database, it is used to store data. As all 
other photographs management programs, &digikam; too uses the database for some 
obvious reasons like avoiding data duplication, reducing data redundancy, a 
quick search engine, and greater data integrity. Moreover, the cost of data 
entry, storage and retrieval are drastically reduced. Additionally, any user 
can access the data using query language.
+           Everyone knows about a database; it is used to store data. As all 
other photographs management programs, &digikam; too uses the database for some 
obvious reasons like avoiding data duplication, reducing data redundancy, a 
quick search engine, and greater data integrity. Moreover, the cost of data 
entry, storage and retrieval are drastically reduced. Additionally, any user 
can access the data using query language.
         </para>
 
         <para>
@@ -14,7 +14,7 @@
 
         <para>
 
-            The &digikam; actually manages more than one databases. For 
convenience, it is broadly categorized in three:
+            The &digikam; actually manages more than one database. For 
convenience, it is broadly categorized in three:
 
             <orderedlist>
 
@@ -40,7 +40,7 @@
         <title>Technical Background and Configuration</title>
 
         <para>
-            The whole details of database settings is mostly given in the 
setup section about <link linkend="using-setup-database">&digikam; 
databases</link>.
+            The whole details of database settings are mostly given in the 
setup section about <link linkend="using-setup-database">&digikam; 
databases</link>.
         </para>
 
     </sect2>
diff --git a/digikam/intro-firstrun.docbook b/digikam/intro-firstrun.docbook
index 7c1fed9..92f8e33 100644
--- a/digikam/intro-firstrun.docbook
+++ b/digikam/intro-firstrun.docbook
@@ -14,7 +14,7 @@
             </para>
 
             <para>
-                When you start &digikam; for the very first time it will ask 
you where you store your photographs. You can choose any local, remote or 
removable folder. Just type in the path name of a folder or click on the 
<guilabel>Browse...</guilabel> icon to select a folder from the dialog.
+                When you start &digikam; for the very first time, it will ask 
you where you store your photographs. You can choose any local, remote or 
removable folder. Just type in the path name of a folder or click on the 
<guilabel>Browse...</guilabel> icon to select a folder from the dialog.
             </para>
 
             <para>
@@ -39,11 +39,11 @@
             </para>
 
             <para>
-                Next, you will have to choose the way you would like to open 
RAW files : either with automatic adjustments or with the digiKam RAW import 
tool to adjust corrections manually.
+                Next, you will have to choose the way you would like to open 
RAW files: either with automatic adjustments or with the digiKam RAW import 
tool to adjust corrections manually.
             </para>
 
             <para>
-                If you don't know what is a RAW file or if your camera doesn't 
support RAW files, you should keep the default setting and skip this step.
+                If you don't know what a RAW file is, or if your camera 
doesn't support RAW files, you should keep the default setting and skip this 
step.
             </para>
 
             <para>
@@ -87,7 +87,7 @@
             </para>
 
             <para>
-                Tooltips are a fast and easy way to display important 
information about a photograph, they popup as the mouse hovers over a 
thumbnail. Select "Use tooltips" if you want to display them.
+                Tooltips are a fast and easy way to display important 
information about a photograph; they popup as the mouse hovers over a 
thumbnail. Select "Use tooltips" if you want to display them.
             </para>
 
             <para>
@@ -129,11 +129,11 @@
             </para>
 
             <para>
-                When you use an existing folder of photographs, as the Album 
Library folder, you will notice that the Albums in the Album list do not have 
photographs as their icons. You can change that by dragging any photograph in 
the Album onto the folder icon in the left sidebar and use this as the Album 
icon. See the <link linkend="using-mainwindow-albumsview">Album</link> section 
for details of how to change the Album icon.
+                When you use an existing folder of photographs as the Album 
Library folder, you will notice that the Albums in the Album list do not have 
photographs as their icons. You can change that by dragging any photograph in 
the Album onto the folder icon in the left sidebar and use this as the Album 
icon. See the <link linkend="using-mainwindow-albumsview">Album</link> section 
for details of how to change the Album icon.
             </para>
 
             <para>
-                &digikam; uses a dedicated database to store thumbnails with 
an optimized wavelets compression algorithm (PGF)  thumbnail folders. There is 
no way of hiding non-standard thumbnail folders from the <quote>Albums</quote> 
list. If you want to keep them you could create an Album Category that just 
contains all the thumbnail Folders and then view your Albums in  
<menuchoice><guimenu>View</guimenu><guimenuitem>Sort 
Albums</guimenuitem><guimenuitem>By Category</guimenuitem></menuchoice> order. 
See the <link linkend="using-mainwindow-albumsview">Album</link> section for 
more about Album Categories.
+                &digikam; uses a dedicated database to store thumbnails with 
an optimized wavelets compression algorithm (PGF). There is no way of hiding 
non-standard thumbnail folders from the <quote>Albums</quote> list. If you want 
to keep them you could create an Album Category that just contains all the 
thumbnail Folders and then view your Albums in  
<menuchoice><guimenu>View</guimenu><guimenuitem>Sort 
Albums</guimenuitem><guimenuitem>By Category</guimenuitem></menuchoice> order. 
See the <link linkend="using-mainwindow-albumsview">Album</link> section for 
more about Album Categories.
             </para>
 
             <para>
diff --git a/digikam/intro-imageformats.docbook 
b/digikam/intro-imageformats.docbook
index ece8782..23dad0b 100644
--- a/digikam/intro-imageformats.docbook
+++ b/digikam/intro-imageformats.docbook
@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@
        </para>
 
        <para>
-           &digikam; only displays files that are in formats that it 
understands. It does this by looking at the file extension on the files and 
checking this against a predefined list. If the file extension is in the list 
&digikam; will show the file in the Image View, provided the appropriate 
library is installed. You can change the list of file extensions that &digikam; 
will accept, see the <link linkend="using-setup">Configuration</link> section 
for more details.
+           &digikam; only displays files that are in formats that it 
understands. It does this by looking at the file extension on the files and 
checking this against a predefined list. If the file extension is in the list 
&digikam; will show the file in the Image View, provided the appropriate 
library is installed. You can change the list of file extensions that &digikam; 
will accept; see the <link linkend="using-setup">Configuration</link> section 
for more details.
         </para>
 
         <para>
@@ -35,11 +35,11 @@
     <sect2> <title>JPEG</title>
         
         <para>
-           JPEG is a compressed format, that trades some of the image quality 
to keep file sizes small. In fact, most cameras save their images in this 
format unless you specify otherwise. A JPEG image is stored using lossy 
compression and you can vary the amount of compression. This allows you to 
choose between lower compression and higher image quality or greater 
compression and poorer quality. The only reason to choose higher compression is 
because it creates smaller file so you can store more images, and it's easier 
to send them by e-mail or post them on the Web. Most cameras give you two or 
three choices equivalent to good, better, best although the names vary.
+           JPEG is a compressed format that trades some of the image quality 
to keep file sizes small. In fact, most cameras save their images in this 
format unless you specify otherwise. A JPEG image is stored using lossy 
compression, and you can vary the amount of compression. This allows you to 
choose between lower compression and higher image quality or greater 
compression and poorer quality. The only reason to choose higher compression is 
because it creates smaller files so you can store more images, and it's easier 
to send them by e-mail or post them on the Web. Most cameras give you two or 
three choices equivalent to good, better, best, although the names vary.
        </para>
             
         <para>
-            JPEG 2000 is supported as well. It provides for the same 
compression ratio the better (smoother) results compared to JPEG. The 2000 
version has the option of being lossless if so specified in the settings.
+            JPEG 2000 is supported as well. It provides for the same 
compression ratio with better (smoother) results compared to JPEG. The 2000 
version has the option of being lossless if so specified in the settings.
         </para>
 
     </sect2>
@@ -47,7 +47,7 @@
     <sect2> <title>TIFF</title>
 
         <para>
-            TIFF has been widely accepted and widely supported as an image 
format. Commonly, TIFF may be stored by the camera in uncompressed form or 
using lossless compression algorithm (Deflate). It maintains higher image 
quality but at the expense of much larger file sizes. Some cameras let you save 
your images in this format and it is a popular format because of its lossless 
compression algorithm. The problem is that the format has been altered by so 
many people that there are now 50 or more flavors and not all are recognizable 
by programs.
+            TIFF has been widely accepted and widely supported as an image 
format. Commonly, TIFF may be stored by the camera in uncompressed form or 
using a lossless compression algorithm (Deflate). It maintains higher image 
quality but at the expense of much larger file sizes. Some cameras let you save 
your images in this format, and it is a popular format because of its lossless 
compression algorithm. The problem is that the format has been altered by so 
many people that there are now 50 or more flavors and not all are recognizable 
by programs.
         </para>
 
     </sect2>
@@ -79,7 +79,7 @@
         </para>
 
         <para>
-            If you want to learn more about RAW image format visit the very 
helpful guides<ulink url="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Raw_image_format";> 
Wikipedia,</ulink> <ulink 
url="http://www.luminous-landscape.com/tutorials/understanding-series/u-raw-files.shtml";>
 The Luminous Landscape,</ulink> and <ulink 
url="http://www.cambridgeincolour.com/tutorials/RAW-file-format.htm";> Cambridge 
in Colour</ulink>. You can convert RAW format images into JPEG, PNG, or TIFF in 
&digikam; using the <link linkend="raw-workflow">Image Editor</link>.
+            If you want to learn more about RAW image format visit the very 
helpful guides <ulink 
url="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Raw_image_format";>Wikipedia,</ulink> <ulink 
url="http://www.luminous-landscape.com/tutorials/understanding-series/u-raw-files.shtml";>
 The Luminous Landscape,</ulink> and <ulink 
url="http://www.cambridgeincolour.com/tutorials/RAW-file-format.htm";> Cambridge 
in Colour</ulink>. You can convert RAW format images into JPEG, PNG, or TIFF in 
&digikam; using the <link linkend="raw-workflow">Image Editor</link>.
         </para>
 
         <para>
diff --git a/digikam/intro-movieformats.docbook 
b/digikam/intro-movieformats.docbook
index 73ca1f4..b542ea5 100644
--- a/digikam/intro-movieformats.docbook
+++ b/digikam/intro-movieformats.docbook
@@ -29,7 +29,7 @@
         </para>
 
         <para>
-            FFmpeg codec is available under &Linux; desktop, MacOS, and 
Windows. You will don't need to install extra video codec on your computer.
+            FFmpeg codec is available under &Linux; desktop, MacOS, and 
Windows. You don't need to install extra video codecs on your computer.
         </para>
 
     </sect2>
@@ -38,9 +38,9 @@
         <title>Video Features</title>
 
         <para>
-            With &digikam;, you will be able to read video metadata, as movies 
length, video frames per seconds, video size, and encoding options, 
-            in goal to populate the database at scanning and to perform 
searches on your collection about video properties.
-            You will be able to play video in embedded preview mode, and while 
a slideshow. This include to preview video from your camera device before 
+            With &digikam;, you will be able to read video metadata, such as 
movie length, video frames per second, video size, and encoding options, 
+            in order to populate the database at scanning and to perform 
searches on your collection about video properties.
+            You will be able to play video in embedded preview mode, and in a 
slideshow. This includes previewing video from your camera device before 
             downloading (only with USB Mass Storage connection mode).
         </para>
 

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