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xiangyu feng commented on FLINK-33235:
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[~martijnvisser] Hi Martjin, thx for your comment. I see your point now and I 
agree with you on this. However, I still want to improve this doc in following 
ways:

1, After checking the [Documentation 
Guide|[https://flink.apache.org/how-to-contribute/documentation-style-guide/],] 
we should use 'active voice' and 'you'  instead of 'passive voice' and 'we' in 
the doc;

2, Add architecture graphs in this doc;

3, Fix typos and misconfigured options in this doc;

4, Add notes to explain that some OLAP features may have not released yet, user 
can choose to build from the master branch;

I will change the tittle and description accordingly, WDYT?

 

> Quickstart guide for Flink OLAP should support building from master branch
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>
>                 Key: FLINK-33235
>                 URL: https://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/FLINK-33235
>             Project: Flink
>          Issue Type: Sub-task
>          Components: Documentation
>            Reporter: xiangyu feng
>            Assignee: xiangyu feng
>            Priority: Major
>
> Many features required by OLAP session cluster are still in master branch or 
> in-progress and not released yet, for example: FLIP-295, FLIP-362, FLIP-374. 
> We need to address this in the document and show users how to quickly build 
> OLAP Session Cluster from master branch.



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