Hi,

We anticipate that the issues will be concluded by that time ;-) However, it would still be beneficial to address any outstanding issues or to offer feedback to SCHC. We are pleased to present and will propose slides for that occasion.

https://datatracker.ietf.org/meeting/interim-2025-schc-03/session/schc

The current version of the draft is available here:

https://github.com/mglt/draft-mglt-ipsecme-diet-esp/blob/schc/draft-ietf-ipsecme-diet-esp_schc.txt


Yours,
Daniel



On 2025-02-06 10:42, Pascal Thubert wrote:
Hello Daniel

we are cancelling the next SCHC interim but the one on Feb 25th is open and if you like we can have that discussion then?

all the best

Pascal

Le lun. 27 janv. 2025 à 21:14, Daniel Migault <mglt.i...@gmail.com> a écrit :

    Hi,

    For clarification we do acknowledge that SCHC required additional
    work. We are definitely willing to be more aligned to SCHC and
    more than happy to work on it with you. We will contact you to
    arrange a meeting.

    Yours,
    Daniel

    On Mon, Jan 27, 2025 at 3:40 AM Laurent Toutain <laur...@touta.in>
    wrote:

        Hi Daniel,

        May be it is clear from a IPsec perspective, but not from a
        SCHC perspective.

        I think that to be called SCHC, the compression description in
        your draft must be aligned with the vocabulary on RFC8724 and
        forthcoming architecture. The notion of rule looks ambiguous
        in your draft, looks more like an entry in the SCHC
        terminology, making hard to follow where you are going. Same
        thing for the tables, in RFC 8724 and 8824 you have an
        "unformal" way to describe how the header fields are
        compressed. This has to be defined. This helps also to create
        the augmentation the RFC9363 Data Model to add the FID and
        MO/CDA you are defining in your draft.

        We can work on it if you want.

        Laurent

        On Mon, Jan 27, 2025 at 3:03 AM Daniel Migault
        <mglt.i...@gmail.com> wrote:

            Hi,

            This iteration has taken into account a considerable
            number of comments that have been received to date. While
            some comments related to SCHC are still pending
            resolution, those concerning IPsec appear to have been
            addressed. Consequently, this version can serve as a solid
            foundation for subsequent reviews.

            The current version is available here:
            https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ipsecme-diet-esp/

            The diff can be seen here:
            
https://author-tools.ietf.org/diff?doc_1=draft-ietf-ipsecme-diet-esp-04&doc_2=draft-ietf-ipsecme-diet-esp-03
            
<https://author-tools.ietf.org/diff?doc_1=draft-ietf-ipsecme-diet-esp-04&doc_2=draft-ietf-ipsecme-diet-esp-03>

            Yours,
            Daniel


            On 2025-01-23 14:51, Ana Minaburo wrote:
            Dear Daniel,
            Thank you for sharing this work. I appreciate the thought
            you've put into it, and it provides us with a good
            starting point for further development.
            I have found some points for discussion

            1. the Strata
            In your document, you need 3 strata to compress the
            complete stack. And anywhere in the document, you define
            the SCHC Header Instance of each stratum.
            I understand that for EEC and CTEC strata use a
            compressed SCHC Header where there is only one Rule and
            the length is zero,
            for instance for the IIP strata you must define a SCHC
            Header to identify the next protocol in the stack.

            2. Terminology
            - You need to read the new architecture version and
            update your terminology.
            - SCHC Context has been removed, and there is only SCHC
            SoR for each instance.
            In the SoR there is only Rules, there is no context.
            - You need to add the SCHC Strata
            - You need to define the SCHC Header Instances
            - You need to align your terminology section to
            draft-architecture

            3. SCHC SoR initialization
            You talk about a SA (Security Association) that will
            generate the corresponding SCHC rules.
            For me is not clear what you mean. Will the SA use the
            yang data model together with the SA for this generation?

            4. SCHC Profile
            Until now, a SCHC Profile has been defined for Layer Two
            fragmentation parameters.
            I'm not sure you are using the correct term for SCHC
            profile because you are not doing fragmentation.
            It will be good to discuss and see what you mean by Profile.

            5. Padding
            I'm not a security specialist, but I see you are doing
            double padding, one in SCHC compression and the other in
            the ESP.
            Is it a security reason to do this way? If not SCHC does
            not require alignment, so perhaps you can eliminate one
            padding

            6. SoR and Rules
            There is a confusion between Rule and FID. A Rule is a
            description of the header fields, all the header fields!
            the Rule does not have a direction by itself but each FID
            in the Rule has it.

            7. Identification of SoR
            The architecture draft does not give any way to do this
            identification, if you need it, you have to provide the
            way to do it. (Section 4.2)

            8. Table 1
            This table is very confusing, you are defining
            parameters, and at the same time, you are inventing TVs.
            But in your 'possible values' you mixed between CDAs and
            values.
            So this Table gives a different approach that is not used
            in SCHC

            9. New MO / CDA and functions
            There are 3 new MO/CDA, I'm not sure you need all of
            them. They have not been defined in the RFCs 8724, or
            8824, nor the architecture, so you need to present the
            need for these new MO/CDA to see their feasibility
            We can discuss but the "lower" CDA must be a "compute*"
            The "generate" may also be a "compute*"
            The MSB(start,end) and LSB (strat,end) functions, as I
            understand you are using them for the range. It is
            another way to do it, that needs consensus

            Ana














            On Thu, Jan 9, 2025 at 6:01 PM Daniel Migault
            <mglt.i...@gmail.com> wrote:

                Hi,

                Please find the WGLC for our compressed ESP based on
                SCHC. Feel free to share your reviews/comments.

                Yours,
                Daniel

                ---------- Forwarded message ---------
                From: *Tero Kivinen* <kivi...@iki.fi>
                Date: Wed, Jan 8, 2025 at 6:15 PM
                Subject: [IPsec] WGLC for draft-ietf-ipsecme-diet-esp
                To: <ipsec@ietf.org>


                This will start two week WGLC for the
                draft-ietf-ipsecme-diet-esp [1].
                This last call will end at 2025-01-23. If you have
                any comments about
                the draft send them to the WG list.

                [1]
                https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ipsecme-diet-esp/
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