Hi Rich, thank you for your review.
> Reviewer: Rich Salz > Review result: Ready > > I'm the ARTART reviewer for this document. The kinds of things this > directorate > looks for are described at > https://wiki.ietf.org/group/art/TypicalARTAreaIssues > > I found this wording initially confusing: "the sender in accordance with AH > ([RFC4302] Section 3.3.2) and ESP ([RFC4303] Section 3.3.3) specifications" I > suggest "the sender in accordance with the specifications for AH ([RFC4302] > Section 3.3.2) and ESP ([RFC4303] Section 3.3.3) ..." That aside, I found the > Introduction incredibly useful background information, thank you. Thank you. I'll fix the wording as you suggested. > I found nothing of concern otherwise. Regards, Valery. _______________________________________________ IPsec mailing list -- ipsec@ietf.org To unsubscribe send an email to ipsec-le...@ietf.org
