On Tue, 7 Jun 2022, Tero Kivinen wrote:
but the RFC8223 is completely unrelated to the matter in hand:
I assume it should be RFC8221 (i.e. replace the text in section 1 and the reference).
Yes, fixed.
This document says it updates 7296, 8221, and 8247. I am not completely sure what it is supposed to update in RFC 7296? I can somewhat understand that it supposedly updates 8221 and 8247 as it changes the status of some cryptographic algorithms from MAY to DEPRECATED, but I do not think there is anything in RFC7296 that is really updated (not RFC8221, or 8247 do not update 7296). I.e., what changes do RFC 7296 implementations need to do based on this document (knowing that RFC7296 didn't specify the mandatory to implement algorithms in it)? Adding new status column to IANA is not updating the protocol. So I would remove the 7296 from the Updates list.
Agreed, done.
In the section 1 there is text saying: IKEv1 has been moved to Historic status. I think it is supposed to say "This document moves IKEv1 to Historic status".
We used the text because RFCs do not make documents Historic, it is IESG actions. See our whatsapp msg exchange.
-- What about other related RFCs, like RFC2407 The Internet IP Security Domain of Interpretation for ISAKMP, and RFC2408 Internet Security Association and Key Management Protocol (ISAKMP)? Both of them are also obsoleted by the IKEv2, and are standard track documents. I think we should move all of them to HISTORIC, i.e. change section 3 to say "RFC 2407, RFC 2408, and RFC 2409 to Historic".
Yes. Done.
I think the Normative and Informal References split is not correct. For example I do not think any of the RFC2407-2409, or RFC4306 are normative. I think the normative references section should just list RFC2119, RFC8174, RFC8221 (replace 8223 wih this), and RFC8247. The IKEv1, and IKEv2 releated RFCs are not needed to be normative references, as you do not need to read and understand to know they are deprecated :-)
Done :)
I.e., move RFC2407, 2408, 2409, 4306, 6407, 7296, 8784 to informative references section. RFC7296 might also be in normative if it is kept in the updates list...
I removed 7296 from the updates: list. All changes are in -06. Paul _______________________________________________ IPsec mailing list IPsec@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ipsec