Hi Murray, thank you for your comments.
> Murray Kucherawy has entered the following ballot position for > draft-ietf-ipsecme-ikev2-intermediate-09: No Objection > > When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all > email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this > introductory paragraph, however.) > > > Please refer to > https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/statements/handling-ballot-positions/ > for more information about how to handle DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. > > > The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ipsecme-ikev2-intermediate/ > > > > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > COMMENT: > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > > In Section 5, it's peculiar to use normative keywords ("RECOMMENDED", in this > case) against future documents. I suggest lower-casing that word. I agree. Changed to lowercase. > In Section 6, the full name of the second registry being updated is "IKEv2 > Notify Message Types - Status Types". Fixed. Thank you! Regards, Valery. _______________________________________________ IPsec mailing list IPsec@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ipsec
