If there are no objections from the WG I will incorporate these changes with some edits (e.g., we refer to congestion control and non-congestion control as modes already so I'll need to change the way those are referred to, to avoid confusion with the new term "AGGFRAG mode").
Thanks, Chris. > On Mar 15, 2021, at 11:53 AM, Valery Smyslov <smyslov.i...@gmail.com> wrote: > > Hi, > > as suggested by Tero at IETF110 I've prepared concrete proposal for the text > changes in draft-ietf-ipsecme-iptfs-07. > I tried to make minimal changes - mostly they consist of more accurate (as it > looks to me) naming > of things and more accurate separation of AGGFRAG and IP-TFS. No bits on the > wire are affected. > Document structure and section numbers are not changed. However, the name of > the draft > is changed as well as its abstract. > > The only technical change is in Section 2.2.3, where I suggest to change: > > When using the AGGFRAG_PAYLOAD in conjunction with replay detection, > the window size for both MAY be reduced to share the smaller of the > two window sizes. > > to > > When using the AGGFRAG_PAYLOAD in conjunction with replay detection, > the window size for both SHOULD be reduced to share the smaller of the > two window sizes. > > I suggested it before but it seemed to be lost in a long list of suggestions. > The rational for this change: if reassembly window size is greater than > replay protection window size, then not yet reassembled packets will never be > reassembled, > because needed fragments will never be received. So, having reassembly window > longer > than replay protection window is a waste of resources, thus SHOULD instead of > MAY. > > Instead of long list of small suggested changes in the body of this message > I've > edited the .txt version of the draft and fed current and my versions to > rfcdiff. > The result is in attachment. Note that I didn't touch ToC. > > Regards, > Valery. > > > <Diff_ draft-ietf-ipsecme-iptfs-07.txt - > draft-ietf-ipsecme-iptfs-07-svan.txt.html>_______________________________________________ > IPsec mailing list > IPsec@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ipsec
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