Hi, Erik. Thank you for your comments, we will consider carefully how to present it better.
-- Lin He > -----Original Messages----- > From: "Erik Kline" <ek.i...@gmail.com> > Sent Time: 2023-07-06 04:48:18 (Thursday) > To: "Lin He" <he-...@tsinghua.edu.cn> > Cc: int-area@ietf.org, sunan...@h3c.com, "IPv6 List" <i...@ietf.org> > Subject: Re: [Int-area] Fw: New Version Notification for draft-bi-intarea-savi-wlan-01.txt > > +6MAN > > <no hats=""> > I think Section 7 paragraph 2 should reference RFC 7934 and perhaps > reframe the "limits" text in some way mindful of that BCP's sections 7 > and 8. > > Thanks, > -ek > > On Wed, Jul 5, 2023 at 5:25 AM Lin He <he-...@tsinghua.edu.cn> wrote: > > > > Hi, all. > > > > We have updated the savi-wlan draft. The main changes are as follows: > > 1) A description of the impact of multiple addresses for an IPv6 interface and the way IPv6 interface identifiers are generated has been added (Section 3.3). > > 2) A description of how binding migration should be done in case of failure, in Section 3.4 > > (3) Updated the description of "IPv6 flag" in Section 5.1.1.4 to explicitly specify that the SLAAC assigned address is represented by the value 4. > > (4) Added consideration of MAC address randomization (Section 8). > > > > We warmly welcome your valuable feedback and comments. > > > > Thanks in advance. > > > > -- > > Lin He > > > > -----Original Messages----- > > From: internet-dra...@ietf.org > > Sent Time: 2023-07-05 20:09:49 (Wednesday) > > To: "Jianping Wu" <jianp...@cernet.edu.cn>, "Lin He" <he-...@tsinghua.edu.cn>, "Mingwei Xu" <x...@cernet.edu.cn>, "Tao Lin" <lin...@h3c.com>, "You Wang" <wangyo...@mails.tsinghua.edu.cn> > > Cc: > > Subject: New Version Notification for draft-bi-intarea-savi-wlan-01.txt > > > > > > A new version of I-D, draft-bi-intarea-savi-wlan-01.txt > > has been successfully submitted by Lin He and posted to the > > IETF repository. > > > > Name: draft-bi-intarea-savi-wlan > > Revision: 01 > > Title: A SAVI Solution for WLAN > > Document date: 2023-07-05 > > Group: Individual Submission > > Pages: 17 > > URL: https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-bi-intarea-savi-wlan-01.txt > > Status: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-bi-intarea-savi-wlan/ > > Htmlized: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-bi-intarea-savi-wlan > > Diff: https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url2=draft-bi-intarea-savi-wlan-01 > > > > Abstract: > > This document describes a source address validation solution for > > WLANs where 802.11i or other security mechanisms are enabled to > > secure MAC addresses. This mechanism snoops NDP and DHCP packets to > > bind IP addresses to MAC addresses, and relies on the security of MAC > > addresses guaranteed by 802.11i or other mechanisms to filter IP > > spoofing packets. It can work in the special situations described in > > the charter of SAVI (Source Address Validation Improvements) > > workgroup, such as multiple MAC addresses on one interface. This > > document describes three different deployment scenarios, with > > solutions for migration of binding entries when hosts move from one > > access point to another. > > > > > > > > > > The IETF Secretariat > > > > </wangyo...@mails.tsinghua.edu.cn></lin...@h3c.com></x...@cernet.edu.cn></he-...@tsinghua.edu.cn></jianp...@cernet.edu.cn> > > > > _______________________________________________ > > Int-area mailing list > > Int-area@ietf.org > > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/int-area </he-...@tsinghua.edu.cn></no></i...@ietf.org></he-...@tsinghua.edu.cn></ek.i...@gmail.com> _______________________________________________ Int-area mailing list Int-area@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/int-area
