---------- Forwarded message --------- From: Dirk Hugo <dirkvh...@gmail.com> Date: Thu, Apr 13, 2023 at 11:25 AM Subject: INT area review of draft-ietf-i2nsf-consumer-facing-interface-dm-27 To: <draft-ietf-i2nsf-consumer-facing-interface...@ietf.org>, < i2nsf-cha...@ietf.org>, <i2...@ietf.org>, <dunbar...@gmail.com>, Eric Vyncke (evyncke) <evyncke=40cisco....@dmarc.ietf.org>
Dear all, enclosed please find my delayed (sorry!) review of the draft version 27. I have done the review on assignment by INT AD and think to draft is very useful though quite detailed and maybe sometimes repetitive in structure. What I missed is how multiple (malicious) MAC addresses or MAC address ranges could be provided - since it is mentioned that more than one may be in scope. I think it should proceed. Beyond that I only missed a reference to Figure 14 and found some nits as provided in attached IDdiff outcome. Also a consistent format of the "description" with or without final dot/fulstop would be nice - and explanation of SNS before sect. 7.2 Thanks to the authors and contributors for their effort! Best regards Dirk
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