> Indiana team,
> 
> Please review the 1st batch of installation
> documentation for 
> the 2008.11 release ASAP this week. 
> 
> 1) Getting Started With OpenSolaris 2008.11 at
> http://www.opensolaris.org/os/project/caiman/files/get
> start.pdf
> 

1.  On page 11, I don't quite follow what the last paragraph meant:

"  After you install the OpenSolaris 2008.11 release, if you wish to manually 
change the installed "system to permit root logins, remove root as an assigned 
role for users. Then, type
"  the following at the command line:"

(Also it probably should mention that you have to su to root to run that 
command.)

2.  Is it possible to add at least a sentence that the user can also install 
the OpenSolaris LiveCD onto a USB harddrive?

3.  Some links and mirrors are not functional yet, I am sure you're aware of 
that.


> Changes in Getting Started With OpenSolaris 2008.11:
> - Please check blog links to see if any are outdated.
> - I added a New Features section with Auto Install
> and Distro 
> Constructor descriptions.  
> - I moved the Upgrade section into this book.
> - The IPS sections are moved to a separate book that
> will be reviewed
> next week.
> - The Snap Upgrade section was moved to a separate
> book per below.
> - Rearranged some sections and rewrote for clarity.
> - Basic installation procedures are largely
> unchanged.
> - Some of the doc cross-references still point to
> 2008.05 docs.
> 
> 2) Managing Multiple Boot Environments in OpenSolaris
> 2008.11 at
> http://www.opensolaris.org/os/project/caiman/files/sna
> pupgrade.pdf
> 

Since you have to run most of the beadm commands as root, perhaps the dollar 
signs ($) should all be changed to the pound sign (#).



> Changes in Managing Multiple Boot Environments in
> OpenSolaris 2008.11:
> - This is the former Snap Upgrade chapter with new
> section
> added for zones support. 
> - Upgrade section was moved out of here and into the
> Getting Started Guide.
> - Minimal changes except for new zones support
> section.
> 
> 
> Review docs for Auto Installer and Distro Constructor
> will be routed for review later this week.
> 
> Barbara
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