looks good to me except that maybe using the IETF Announce list rather than IESG minutes as the publication of record
Scott On Sep 5, 2013, at 1:10 PM, Pete Resnick <presn...@qti.qualcomm.com> wrote: > Having seen no further comments, Jari has asked me to post -01 with the > changes. Done. > > pr > > -- > Pete Resnick<http://www.qualcomm.com/~presnick/> > Qualcomm Technologies, Inc. - +1 (858)651-4478 >