a new version addressing your review is on its way. Johannes
Roni Even schrieb am 30.06.2013 08:44: > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, > please see the FAQ at > <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may > receive. > > Document: draft-merkle-tls-brainpool-02 > > Reviewer: Roni Even > > Review Date:2013–6–30 > > IETF LC End Date: 2013-7–23 > > IESG Telechat date: > > > > Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication as Standard track RFC. > > > > > > Major issues: > > > > Minor issues: > > > > In section 1 you reference TLS 1.0 and 1.1 usage based on RFC 4492. What > about TLS 1.2 usage specified in RFC5246 A.7 > > > > > > > > Nits/editorial comments: > > 1. In section 3 the registry name is EC Named Curve > 2. In section 3 change “suitability” to “suitable” > > > -- Mit freundlichen Grüßen, Dr. Johannes Merkle Principal Beratung, Elektronische Identitäten Public Sector secunet Security Networks AG Mergenthaler Allee 77 65760 Eschborn Germany Telefon +49 201 54 54-3091 Telefax +49 201 54 54-1325 Mobil +49 175 2224439 johannes.mer...@secunet.com www.secunet.com
