Hi Frederick,

On Thu, Feb 7, 2013 at 4:24 PM,  <frederick.hir...@nokia.com> wrote:
> Don
>
> I've received feedback from XML Security working group members that propose 
> you change the URIs in the draft RFC for AES Key Wrap with Padding to match 
> what is in XML Encryption 1.1, both because we are going to Recommendation 
> and because there is code that currently uses those values.
>
> Can you please make the change, using the xmlenc11 URIs I listed below in 
> item 1?

Sure, I'll do that.

> Thanks
> regards, Frederick
>
> Frederick Hirsch
> Nokia
>
>
> On Feb 7, 2013, at 11:04 AM,  wrote:
>
>> Donald
>>
>> Some additional comments on draft 
>> http://tools.ietf.org/pdf/draft-eastlake-additional-xmlsec-uris-08.pdf
>>
>> sorry about the delay getting these comments to you.
>>
>> (1) We have defined different *informative* URIs for AES Key Wrap with 
>> Padding in XML Encryption 1.1 
>> [http://www.w3.org/TR/xmlenc-core1/#sec-kw-aes-with-pad] which are different 
>> from those in the RFC, namely
>>
>> http://www.w3.org/2009/xmlenc11#kw-aes-128-pad
>> http://www.w3.org/2009/xmlenc11#kw-aes-192-pad
>> http://www.w3.org/2009/xmlenc11#kw-aes-256-pad
>>
>> I suggest we change this informative appendix of XML Encryption 1.1 (and the 
>> Security Algorithms Cross-Reference) to match what is in the RFC draft. 
>> Thomas, is there any problem with that at this PR stage?
>>
>> Those in the RFC draft are:
>>
>> http://www.w3.org/2007/05/xmldsig-more#kw-aes128-pad
>> http://www.w3.org/2007/05/xmldsig-more#kw-aes192-pad
>> http://www.w3.org/2007/05/xmldsig-more#kw-aes256-pad

As above, I'll change the draft to use the ...//2009/xmlenc11#... URIs.

>> (2) ConcatKDF fragment needs fixing in 4.1 and change log Appendix A due to 
>> a typo
>>
>> "2009/xmlenc11#ConctKDF [XMLENC]" should be "2009/xmlenc11#ConcatKDF 
>> [XMLENC]"
>>
>> "#ConctKDF," should be "#ConcatKDF,"

OK.

>> (3) To some degree the fragment index and URI index replicate the published 
>> W3C Note, XML Security Algorithm Cross-Reference and could be incorporated 
>> there.

If you would like to incorporate this information there, that seems
fine. But I'd like to leave it in the draft also.

>> (4) I suggest an update to the Introduction to mention XML Security 1.1 as 
>> follows
>>
>> after "All of these standards and recommendations use URIs [RFC3986] to 
>> identify algorithms and keying information types."
>>
>> add
>>
>> "The W3C has subsequently produced updated  XML Signature 1.1  [XMLDSIG11] 
>> and XML Encryption 1.1 [XMLENC11} versions as well as a new XML Signature 
>> Properties specification [XMLDSIG-PROPERTIES].

OK.

>> (5) Typo in introduction
>>
>> "Canoncialization" should be "Canonicalization"

OK.

>> (6) References
>>
>> Add references to XML Signature 1.1, XML Encryption 1.1, XML Signature 
>> Properties, XML Security Algorithm Cross-Reference (all to be updated upon 
>> Recommendation publication)

The current draft does have references to XML Signature 1.1 and XML
Encryption 1.1. The RFC Reference format permits multiple document
under a single tag and both 1.0 and 1.1 are included under the
[XMLDSIG] and [XMLENC] tags.

I'll add the other two documents.

Thanks,
Donald
=============================
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>> Signature properties has added a namespace: xmlns 
>> dsp="http://www.w3.org/2009/xmldsig-properties";
>>
>> [XMLDSIG-CORE1]
>> D. Eastlake, J. Reagle, D. Solo, F. Hirsch, T. Roessler, K. Yiu. XML 
>> Signature Syntax and Processing Version 1.1. 24 January 2013. W3C Proposed 
>> Recommendation. (Work in progress) 
>> URL:http://www.w3.org/TR/2013/PR-xmldsig-core1-20130124/
>>
>> [XMLENC-CORE1]
>> J. Reagle; D. Eastlake; F. Hirsch; T. Roessler. XML Encryption Syntax and 
>> Processing Version 1.1. 24 January 2013. W3C Proposed Recommendation. (Work 
>> in progress) URL:http://www.w3.org/TR/2013/PR-xmlenc-core1-20130124/
>>
>> [XMLDSIG-PROPERTIES]
>> Frederick Hirsch. XML Signature Properties. 24 January 2013. W3C Proposed 
>> Recommendation. (Work in progress.) URL: 
>> http://www.w3.org/TR/2013/PR-xmldsig-properties-20130124/
>>
>> [XMLSEC-ALGS] F Hirsch, T Roessler, K Yiu XML Security Algorithm 
>> Cross-Reference, 24 January 2013 W3C Working Group Note 
>> http://www.w3.org/TR/2013/NOTE-xmlsec-algorithms-20130124/
>>
>>
>> regards, Frederick
>>
>> Frederick Hirsch, Nokia
>> Chair XML Security WG

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