Is this document misnamed?

I see more about how to put IP inside ANSI C12.22 management data
structs than how to do C12.22 over IP.

Something as important as this should really be in a WG and get a more
thorough review.

Also, based on previous XXX over IP work performed in the IETF,
shouldn't this be standards track?

Thanks

On 10/27/10 5:04 AM, Ralph Droms wrote:
> Avygdor - can you tell me more about the implementations on which the 
> document is based?
>
> - Ralph
>
>
> On Oct 27, 2010, at 2:50 AM 10/27/10, Avygdor Moise wrote:
>
>> Dear Mr. St. Johns,
>>
>> Respectfully, I think that it is not the purpose of the RFC to state what it 
>> is not.
>> The term "all known" cleanly relates to the authors' knowledge of known 
>> implementations. Certainly there may be a few implementations that do not 
>> follow this RFC, but the same is true nearly for any known Standard.
>> Also the term "several proprietary C12.22 over IP implementations" is rather 
>> strong in view of the history of the C12 Standards and the manner in which 
>> they are implemented.
>>
>> Avygdor Moise
>>
>> ----- Original Message ----- From: "Michael StJohns" <[email protected]>
>> To: "Ralph Droms" <[email protected]>; "Avygdor Moise" <[email protected]>
>> Cc: "Ralph Droms" <[email protected]>; "Jonathan Brodkin" 
>> <[email protected]>; "IETF Discussion" <[email protected]>; "IESG IESG" 
>> <[email protected]>
>> Sent: Tuesday, October 26, 2010 4:24 PM
>> Subject: Re: Document Action: 'ANSI C12.22, IEEE 1703 and MC12.22 
>> TransportOver IP' to Informational RFC
>>
>>
>>> Hi Ralph -
>>>
>>> Exactly what I was getting at.  But a slight change in the wording you 
>>> suggested to make things clear.
>>>
>>> Instead as the first paragraph of the abstract or as an RFC editor note I 
>>> suggest:
>>>
>>> "This document is not an official submission on behalf of the ANSI C12.19 
>>> and C12.22 working groups.  It was created by participants in those groups 
>>> building on knowledge of several proprietary C12.22 over IP 
>>> implementations.  The content of this document is an expression of a 
>>> consensus aggregation of those implementations."
>>>
>>>
>>> This, unlike your formulation, doesn't beg the question of whether or not 
>>> "existing implementations"  and "all known" means "every single one 
>>> including ones not publicly announced"
>>>
>>> Thanks, Mike
>>>
>>>
>>> At 05:34 PM 10/26/2010, Ralph Droms wrote:
>>>> Combining an excellent suggestion from Donald and Avygdor's clarification 
>>>> as to the official status of this document, I suggest an RFC Editor note 
>>>> to add the following text as a new last paragraph in the Introduction:
>>>>
>>>> This document was created by technical experts of the ANSI C12.22
>>>> and ANSI C12.19 Standards, based on they first hand implementation
>>>> knowledge of existing C12.22 implementations for the Internet.  It
>>>> is not an official and approved submission on behalf of the ANSI
>>>> C12.22 and ANSI C12.19 working groups.  The content of this document
>>>> is an expression on the aggregate experience of all known
>>>> implementations of ANSI C12.22 for the SmartGrid using the Internet.
>>>>
>>>> - Ralph
>>>>
>>>> On Oct 26, 2010, at 5:25 PM 10/26/10, Avygdor Moise wrote:
>>>>
>>>>> Mr. St. Johns,
>>>>>
>>>>> You ask: "Is this document an official and approved submission on behalf 
>>>>> of the ANSI C12.22 and ANSI C12.19 working groups?"
>>>>> Answer: No it is not.
>>>>>
>>>>> The ANSI C12.22 and ANSI C12.19 standards do not define the Transport 
>>>>> Layer interfaces to the network. They only define the Application Layer 
>>>>> Services and content.
>>>>> This RFC addressed the gap as it applies to transporting C12.22 APDUs 
>>>>> over the Internet.  However technical experts that were involved in the 
>>>>> making, deploying, testing and documenting the referred standards 
>>>>> contributed to the making of this RFC.
>>>>>
>>>>> ANSI, NEMA, NIST, SGIP, MC, IEEE, IETF, AEIC and EEI are fully aware of 
>>>>> this effort and this RFC. The work was carried in plain view.
>>>>>
>>>>> Avygdor Moise
>>>>> ----- Original Message -----
>>>>> From: Michael StJohns
>>>>> To: Avygdor Moise
>>>>> Cc: [email protected] ; IESG IESG ; Jonathan Brodkin
>>>>> Sent: Tuesday, October 26, 2010 2:58 PM
>>>>> Subject: RE: Document Action: 'ANSI C12.22, IEEE 1703 and MC12.22 
>>>>> TransportOver IP' to Informational RFC
>>>>>
>>>>> One simple question:  Is this document an official and approved 
>>>>> submission on behalf of the ANSI C12.22 and ANSI C12.19 working groups?
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>> The specific language in the IESG record (in the working group summary) is
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>> "This document was created by technical experts of the ANSI
>>>>> C12.22
>>>>>  and ANSI C12.19 Standards, based on they first hand
>>>>> implementation
>>>>>  knowledge of existing C12.22 implementations for the Internet.
>>>>> Its
>>>>>  content is an expression on the aggregate experience of all known
>>>>>  implementations of ANSI C12.22 for the SmartGrid using the
>>>>>  internet."
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>> "Created by Technical Experts of the ..."  is NOT the same as "This 
>>>>> document was created by (or is a product of) the ANSI C12.22 and C12.19 
>>>>> working groups"
>>>>>
>>>>> If you're not paying attention, you might assume this was an official 
>>>>> work product of C12.22 and C12.19.
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>> Or is this in reality a C12.22 work product?  If so, why not say so? 
>>>>> Better yet, why not have the ANSI liaison say so?
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>> The issue is not the qualifications of the contributors, nor the process 
>>>>> for creating the document, but whether or not this is a private 
>>>>> contribution rather than a standards body contribution.  The document is 
>>>>> NOT clear on this and reads like a standards body submission.  Given the 
>>>>> authors involvement with the C12 organization, a reasonable person might 
>>>>> assume this is an official submission even though the Working Group Notes 
>>>>> seem to point to an individual or private submission.  It seems 
>>>>> reasonable to clarify which hat is being worn in terms of submission.
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>> Mike
>>>>>
>>>>> At 12:16 PM 10/26/2010, Avygdor Moise wrote:
>>>>>> Dear Nikos,
>>>>>>
>>>>>> I believe that you appropriately addressed the comment and I are in 
>>>>>> complete agreement with your remarks.
>>>>>>
>>>>>> I'd would also like to point out that Mr. St. Johns' concerns are also 
>>>>>> addressed on the IETF data tracker for this RFC ( 
>>>>>> http://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-c1222-transport-over-ip/), on the 
>>>>>> IESG Write-ups tab. Specifically there is a Technical Summary, a Working 
>>>>>> Group Summary and a Document Quality section. These sections fully 
>>>>>> disclose and document the origin and the processes used to produce this 
>>>>>> RFC Draft and the qualifications of the contributors.
>>>>>>
>>>>>> Sincerely
>>>>>> Avygdor Moise
>>>>>>
>>>>>> Chair: ASC C12 SC17, WG2 / ANSI C12.19;  IEEE SCC31 / WG P1377
>>>>>> Editor: ASC C12 SC17, WG1/ ANSI C12.22;  IEEE SCC31 / WG 1703
>>>>>>
>>>>>>> -----Original Message-----
>>>>>>> From: [email protected] [ mailto:[email protected]] On Behalf Of
>>>>>>> ext Nikos Mavrogiannopoulos
>>>>>>> Sent: Tuesday, October 26, 2010 11:49 AM
>>>>>>> To: Michael StJohns
>>>>>>> Cc: [email protected]; [email protected]
>>>>>>> Subject: Re: Document Action: 'ANSI C12.22, IEEE 1703 and MC12.22
>>>>>>> TransportOver IP' to Informational RFC
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> On Mon, Oct 25, 2010 at 7:39 PM, Michael StJohns <[email protected]>
>>>>>>> wrote:
>>>>>>>> Hi -
>>>>>>>> I'm confused about this approval.
>>>>>>>> As I read the draft and the approval comments, this document is an
>>>>>>> independent submission describing how to do C12.22 over IP. But the
>>>>>>> document is without context for "who does this" typical to an
>>>>>>> informational RFC.
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> Is that really typical? Check the MD5 algorithm in [0], I don't see
>>>>>>> such boilerplates like "we at RSA security do hashing like that". I
>>>>>>> think it is obvious that the authors of the document do that, or
>>>>>>> recommend that. I pretty like the current format of informational
>>>>>>> RFCs.
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> [0]. http://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc1321
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> Is this
>>>>>>>> a) A document describing how the document authors would do this if
>>>>>>> they were a standards organization?
>>>>>>>> b) A description of how their company does this in their products?
>>>>>>> Is your question on what informational RFCs are?
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> c) A description of how another standards body (which one????) does
>>>>>>> this?
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> I'd suppose if this was the case it would be mentioned in the document
>>>>>>> in question.
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> d) A back door attempt to form an international standard within the
>>>>>>> IETF without using the traditional IETF working group mechanisms?
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> How can you know that? When somebody specifies his way of doing
>>>>>>> things, is to inform and have interoperability. It might actually
>>>>>>> happen that industry follows this approach and ends-up in a de-facto
>>>>>>> standard. I see nothing wrong with that.
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> regards,
>>>>>>> Nikos
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>>>>>
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