Mandy Chung skrev 2012-05-21 23:13:
Erik,

I like your idea of trying to define the string constants
for the keys to benefit from the compiler checking and
catch any issue due to typos at compile time.  My review
comments below.

Your webrev includes other cleanup.  While it's good to
do the simple minor cleanup with this fix, I'd like to
the warnings cleanup changes be separated from this patch
and done by a separate CR.
Thanks for reviewing,

I got a lot of unused import warnings from the IDE when I changed the
Resources class. When I cleaned them up I thought I might as well clean up the
others too, so I could more easily see that I had taken care of all the
warnings I caused. Same thing with unused member variables and unused methods.

Import-statements will not change how the program executes, so I thought it
was safe to remove them (no risk of introducing new bugs).


   * added generic types where needed.
   * added suppress serialization warning where it was needed.
   * removed suppress serialization annotation where it was not needed.

Specifically, I'm concerned with @SuppressWarning("serial").
Tab.java L31 - it should not be suppressed and instead be
fixed by defining the serialVersionUID (you can find the
value by running serialver tool). Same to XOperations.java and
XTable.java.  I notice that the current code does suppress
"serial" warning that you should check if it should be fixed
as well.
I agree, I was trying to get rid of all the warnings so I could see the real
problems more easily. Adding serialVersionUID might be beyond the scope of
the CR. I can bring back the warnings, if you like, now that I know my code is
free of warnings.


As for the generics, ProxyClient.java and XTree.java (and
maybe some other places). When I saw the use of Iterator,
I typically would also suggest to replacethe Iterator and
while loop with foreach (L601-617 and L710, 736).
I agree, I was trying to get rid of all the warnings so I could see the real
problems. Foreach is prefered, but I think it's beyond the scope of the CR
to replace all those.

Also, adding generics doesn't change the byte code and should be safe.
Rewritings loops could potentially introduce other bugs and to me there is
little benefit.

  Anyway,
the warning cleanup deserves a separate CR and review.
Breaking it up into seperate patches and CRs will take time. Is it really
necessary?

I cleaned up the code so I could make the fix more easily. I don't think it's
worth the hazzle to create a separate bug and patch. I might as well revert
the clean ups.


Below are comments on the change to support translateability.

sun/tools/jconsole/resources/Messages.java
   I suggest to move Messages to sun.tools.jconsole since
   it's a utility class and conventionally resources are put
   in a "resources" subpackage (i.e. sun.tools.jconsole.resources
   in this case).
I think one package private Message class for each package and separate
resource files for each package would be the best, but I didn't want
this CR to blow up, so I put the Message class where the other Java classes
related to resources were before.

I can move it to sun.tools.jconsole, if you think that's better.


   The initializeMessage  method uses the field name as the
   key and initializes its value to its localized message via
   reflection. Such approach seems strange.
I like to enforce one-to-one mapping between the keys in the property file and the keys used in the Java code. When going through the fields in the Message
class, using reflection, I can ensure that all fields have a corresponding
property value in the file, and vice versa.

With this approrach it's not necessary click through all the GUI to verify that all keys exists in the property file. It's also possible to detect if a value
in a property file is no longer in use.

The code that does the one-to-one check was removed, but it should probably be
added back so similar problems can be catched automatically in the future.


   Have you considered about defining the constants with
   the key as the value (i.e. the variable name and its
   value are the same).
The Java constants can't be the same as the property value since the character
you can use for a variable name is limited, for instance a constant can't
contain the ':'-character.

  Instead of initializing each
   static field of the Messages class, you can build
   a map of a key to the localized message + itsmnemonic
   key (like what you have done in building the MNEMONIC_LOOKUP
   map - why not change such hash map to map from a string to
   an object {message+mnemonic}).  In that case, the MNEMONIC_LOOKUP
   doesn't need to be a synchronized map and could be done
   as the class initialization of Resources class.

   It would only need to keep
   Resources.getText(String) method that returns the localized
   message, e.g.
       Resources.getText(Messages.HELP_ABOUT_DIALOG_TITLE)

   I just don't see it's worth the complexity to initialize
   the static fields via reflection to get rid of a convenience
   method.

The synchronization is not really needed, if you always use the keys to
lookup the messages. The static initializer in the Message class should
ensure correct ordering.

Looking up messages "dynamically" means you have to trigger all the
code in the GUI that needs a translated message to be sure you got things
correct. Since there are several hundred messages I think the
static-fields-reflection approach is better.



   It is only my suggestion and I understand that this fix needs
   to be backport to 7u6. If you agree that replacing this
   static field initialization logic with a separate map,
   I'm okay with pushing this approach to 7u6 and push
   a better fix to jdk8.   Or I miss the benefit you were
   considering :)

You are missing it :)

.. and it's probably because I removed the code that did the actual check :)

There are a few names with '_' suffix e.g. L93, 97, 104, 160
   and also some names with '__' (L97, 159).  Do you want to
   embed the space of the message in the key name?  In any case,
   the key names with '_' suffix or double underscores '__' is
   a little confusing.  It would be better just to use '_' for
   separating words of a key name and no need for '_' suffix.
   The names 'CHART_COLON', 'ERROR_COLON_MBEANS...', 'JCONSOLE_COLON',
   and the ones with 'COLON' to describe its message with ":"
   are strange.  If ":" was removed from the message in the
   future, the name would need to be modified to follow this
   naming convention which is overkill.
The keys were generated programmatically.

The 'COLON' was needed so I could differentiate between message that looked
the same, except for the ':' at the end. The pattern was applied to all
messages. Some of those message were removed (since they were no longer in use)

I can remove the 'COLON' suffix where it's not needed, same thing with spaces.

I will go over the message keys and clean up the names, but they were not that
clean before either :)


sun/tools/jconsole/Resources.java
   L52-54 and also other @param, nit:generally we put
   the description in the same line as the @param.
Will fix!

XOpenTypeViewer.java
  L255: this doesn't look right - I think it should be
  Comparable<CompositeData>.  However, this method has
  @SuppressWarning("unchecked") and why was this line
  changed?  Did you get other warning?

CompositeData#get returns Object and because of type erasure it can't be
guaranteed to be Comparable<CompositeData> without an explicit cast, which
I didn't dare to add, so I put in Object.

Yes, I got a rawtypes warning on the Comparable.

Formatting nits: it's good to go through your changes and
fix the formatting nits.  The lines need to be updated to
aligned, a few examples are:
  BorderedComponent.java L152
  CreateMBeanDialog.java L77-78, 165-167, 169-171
  MemoryTab.java L120-121, 126-127
  OverviewTab.java L59-60
  Plotter.java L319-321, 329-331

I didn't include all and please check the files not mentioned above.

Will do!

On 5/21/2012 4:18 AM, Erik Gahlin wrote:
Thanks Michael,

When it comes to ALL CAPs or SturdlyCaps, it's okay if those strings are not translated.

Here is an updated webrev. I removed strings that were no longer in use and made some changes to the make-files.

http://cr.openjdk.java.net/~egahlin/7017818_4/

/E

Michael Fang skrev 2012-05-11 18:16:
Thanks so much Erik for the fix! The messages.properties file look good. I only reviewed the English *messages.properties* file. WPTG will re-translate the ja and zh_CN files. They will attempt to leverage existing translation from *JConsoleResources_xx.java*.

I have a comments about another translatability rule that WPTG follows:

By Oracle software development guideline, ALL CAPs or StudlyCaps strings will not be translated. Examples are:
   19 ACTION_CAPITALIZED=ACTION
   20 ACTION_INFO_CAPITALIZED=ACTION_INFO
  149 MBEAN_INFO=MBeanInfo
  150 MBEAN_NOTIFICATION_INFO=MBeanNotificationInfo
  151 MBEAN_OPERATION_INFO=MBeanOperationInfo
  206 OBJECT_NAME=ObjectName
  231 R_FORWARD_SLASH_W_CAPITALIZED=R/W

  241 SEQ_NUM=SeqNum
  249 SUMMARY_TAB_HEADER_DATE_TIME_FORMAT=FULL,FULL

  273 UNKNOWN_CAPITALIZED=UNKNOWN

If any of the above such as ACTION or UNKNOWN needs to be translated, they should not be ALL CAPS. The translators will not translate those lines by default.

The translators have the ability to see comments (or special requests) if a comment line is inserted immediately prior to any of the resources (each resource string and one comment line immediately before it is stored in translation memory). If you must leave ACTION or UNKNOWN in CAPS, you can try to insert comments.However, WPTG does not guarantee they will be followed.

thanks,

-michael

On 12?05?11? 07:36 ??, Erik Gahlin wrote:
Could you please review? I also need a sponsor.

http://cr.openjdk.java.net/~egahlin/7156518/1_0/

http://monaco.us.oracle.com/detail.jsf?cr=7017818

The patch is for JDK8, but it needs to ported to 7u6 before 5/16.

Thanks!

Erik

Changes:

- Moved localization messages to property files, one message per line, as needed.
- Added '&' to messages so mnemonics could be identified.
- Introduced Message class with static fields corresponding to the keys in the property files.
- Added map for looking up mnemonics.

Testing:

- Verified programmatically that all the messages and mnemonics are "compatible" with the previous mechanism, for Chinese, Japanese and the default locale. - The intention is to run through the GUI to confirm that everything looks ok, but I'm waiting for a build.

Other:

- Fixed a typo in the MemoryPoolStat class, the method getAfterGcUsage returned this.beforeGCUsage instead of this.afterGcUsage - When going through all the code I did some minor clean up that should not impact the program flow:
  * removed unused imports.
  * inlined temporary variables holding messages.
  * removed private member variables that were not accessed.
  * removed private methods that were not referenced.
  * removed local variables that were not used.
  * added generic types where needed.
  * static methods are now called statically.
  * added suppress serialization warning where it was needed.
  * removed suppress serialization annotation where it was not needed.
- In the Message class, the comment "remove? not found in code" will be removed once I know those message are not needed for 7u6.




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