On Sun, 20 Sep 2015 17:49:44 +0200 Ricardo Wurmus <rek...@elephly.net> wrote:
> On IRC I was told that the description wasn’t quite as neutral as it > should have been, so here’s another attempt: > > "M.A.R.S. is a 2D space shooter with pretty visual effects and > attractive physics. Players can battle each other or computer controlled > enemies in different game modes such as space ball, death match, team death > match, cannon keep, and grave-itation pit." > > * “pretty visual effects” rather than “awesome visual effects”. > * “attractive physics” — I could not think of a more appropriate term; it > surely is not “realistic”. > * “exciting game modes” has become “different game modes such as ...” > > What do you think? This version seems more appropriate to me. Thanks! `~Eric
