Alex Kost <alez...@gmail.com> skribis: > Ludovic Courtès (2014-09-02 02:28 +0400) wrote: > >> Alex Kost <alez...@gmail.com> skribis: >> >>> I've just pushed a manual for “guix.el” (into “emacs-ui” branch). I >>> tried my best, but I'm not a native English speaker and I have never >>> worked with Texinfo before, so there may be... issues :-) >> >> Looks good to me! Here are some minor comments (I’m not a native >> speaker either): > > [...] > > Thanks for all your comments. I believe I fixed everything you > mentioned.
Great, thank you for your patience. >> +@menu >> +* Initial Setup:: >> +* Usage:: >> +* Configuration:: >> +@end menu >> >> Please add something to the right-hand side. > > Inventing something useful for the right side was the hardest part :-) Heh. :-) >> Node names are global, so they need to be less generic, to avoid >> possible name clashes with the rest of the manual. For instance: >> >> guix.el Setup >> guix.el Usage >> guix.el Configuration >> >> The section names can remain unchanged, though. > > I used “emacs” instead of “guix.el” because the dot (in “guix.el”) > breaks menu items. Is it OK? I would have made it uppercase, but otherwise yes. Enough nitpicking: when do we merge? :-) It seems to me the main issues have been addressed, so I’m happy with continuing that work in ‘master’. WDYT? Ludo’.
