Hello, I'm assuming that dmd contributions go to the guix list for now.
Attached a patch introducing some changes to the dmd manual — the patch only covers the Introduction section for now as I wanted to submit something with my approach early to know whether it is acceptable. As you can see it's a bit of a rewrite, but I think the English is overall easier to understand. Let me know if you think I should ba approaching this differently. Best wishes, Alex