Olivier Dion <olivier.d...@polymtl.ca> writes: > On Thu, 17 Feb 2022, Blake Shaw <bl...@nonconstructivism.com> wrote: > >> looking forward to any feedback. > > Some things that I think could use some improvement: > > When you play a video while you're talking, make sure that the > volume of the video is very low so we can still hear you. For > example, around 4.20 I can't hear you anymore (headphone). At > least the music is good. > > There's time where you say Guix when you meant Guile or Scheme I > think. For example around 13.40, you show a Git tree as a S-exp > and refer to Guix. > > Looks like there's a latency between the audio and video. Maybe > it's peertube and not your recorder. > > If you use the REPL again for a presentation that is presented > live, I would suggest to add page number so that it's easier to ask > questions and reference the good slide. In theory, one can use the > $* variable of the REPL for that also. > noted! first screencast on Guix so a few issues I didn't anticipated, I'll keep them in mind for next time. > The very good points of your presentation I think are: > > Your language is impeccable and very cleared/articulated. > > I like that you show your real world usage of Guile. I feel that it's > very important to show what Guile is capable of and that it can be > used in a professional working environment. > > Overall, a great presentation. > thanks! > For your `scribble jam` project, maybe you should look into > guile-chickadee <https://dthompson.us/projects/chickadee.html>. It's a > game development toolkit -- based on guile-opengl -- which I think > support most of what you want. So you could use it in some way for your > project. > yes, I've looked at it, but not deeply (this was a recently commissioned work). I won't really be getting started on scribble jam for a few weeks, but will poke at chickadee to see if it's suitable in the meantime.
> Other comments: > > For `Initialization with C` I would call it `C runtime initialization`. > > IMO, `Snarfing macro` should be in the same section as FFI. > > `Scheduling` -> `Multi-Threading` | `Parallelism`. > > `GOOPS` should be under `Guile Modules` or renamed to `Object > Oriented Programming` like `Functionnal programming`. > > SXML is not just used in Web. So I'm not sure if it should be > under the same section. Perhaps under parsing? > > `File Tree Walk` moved to `File System` and rename `POSIX/File System` > to just `File System`. > > Best regards, > old thanks for the feedback and hope you join in tomorrow. best, blake -- “In girum imus nocte et consumimur igni”
