Hi Julian! These all sound like great ideas to me! You normally have access to the web page repository, so feel free to commit your changes there and just send a note so we can check what’s up there.
IMO the parts discussing features or technical merits should be really concise. It could even be a simple bullet list with no sentences, or at least presented in such a way that the reader can quickly skim over it. We may also want a paragraph, or a slogan, regarding extensibility and user freedom. Like “enhancing software freedom”, or “practical software freedom”, something like that[*]. ;-) Do you think you’ll be able to work on it by Tuesday? :-) Thanks, Ludo’. [*] It may sound presumptuous, but hey, that’s marketing.
