Dear Mukul,

For the record. I agree on the comment from Med about license-customized route 
threshold should use enterprise-specific TLV encoding.

Thanks for updating the document accordingly.

Best wishes
Thomas

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Hi Mukul,

Thank you for taking care of the comments. I appreciate the new section on the 
implementation status.

When reviewing the 05-07 diff, I have the following comments:

* Does it really make sense to include text that mandates a vendor-specific 
behavior? Why using type 31 isn’t sufficient here?

CURRENT:
      If the license-customized route threshold is vendor specific, this
      type value (31) SHOULD use enterprise-specific TLV encoding as
      described in Section 3.3 of [I-D.ietf-grow-bmp-tlv-ebit].

I tend to suggest deleting that part.

* The descriptions in the IANA section should be consistent with BMP practice 
(that is, delete “(64-bit Gauge)”). See that inconsistency at 
https://www.iana.org/assignments/bmp-parameters/bmp-parameters.xhtml#statistics-types.
 Having a column to clearly indicate the type would be useful, though.

Cheers,
Med

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Hello Med

All your comments have been addressed in latest version.
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-grow-bmp-bgp-rib-stats/07/

Pls check and let us know if there are any further comments.

Thanks
Mukul



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Thanks, Med, for your comments. I would go over them and get back to you.

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Hi  Mukul, Yisong, Changwang, and Jinming,

Thank you for the effort put into this document. FWIW, you may find a review at:


  *   pdf: 
https://github.com/boucadair/IETF-Drafts-Reviews/blob/master/2025/draft-ietf-grow-bmp-bgp-rib-stats-05-rev%20Med.pdf<https://urldefense.com/v3/__https:/github.com/boucadair/IETF-Drafts-Reviews/blob/master/2025/draft-ietf-grow-bmp-bgp-rib-stats-05-rev*20Med.pdf__;JQ!!NEt6yMaO-gk!Cl2I5P4e4ExpPUJdtm8UN8u8IFgFDRtP2U9y1PKh-ffpAgmwG35ar4QMQ0rKODbIGPOLCzOgaZRrj2nMaHga8NNo$>
  *   doc: 
https://github.com/boucadair/IETF-Drafts-Reviews/blob/master/2025/draft-ietf-grow-bmp-bgp-rib-stats-05-rev%20Med.doc<https://urldefense.com/v3/__https:/github.com/boucadair/IETF-Drafts-Reviews/blob/master/2025/draft-ietf-grow-bmp-bgp-rib-stats-05-rev*20Med.doc__;JQ!!NEt6yMaO-gk!Cl2I5P4e4ExpPUJdtm8UN8u8IFgFDRtP2U9y1PKh-ffpAgmwG35ar4QMQ0rKODbIGPOLCzOgaZRrj2nMaODB7c5B$>

The document includes a comprehensive list of stat types. I wonder whether we 
have a public record about available implems of these stats.

The document claims that it updates 7854, but I don’t think it does.

Also, I recommend the authors to fix the normative dependency on an individual 
draft. You can easily get ride of that citation by having self-contained 
description. I guess you can do the same even with draft-ietf-rtgwg-bgp-pic 
(which is expired).

One side comment, unlike the approach followed by 7854, the new entries at 
https://www.iana.org/assignments/bmp-parameters/bmp-parameters.xhtml<https://urldefense.com/v3/__https:/www.iana.org/assignments/bmp-parameters/bmp-parameters.xhtml__;!!NEt6yMaO-gk!Cl2I5P4e4ExpPUJdtm8UN8u8IFgFDRtP2U9y1PKh-ffpAgmwG35ar4QMQ0rKODbIGPOLCzOgaZRrj2nMaDQQxB1G$>
 includes the type as part of the description. If that information is 
important, it is cleaner to consider adding a new column to the registry 
(called type) to record that.

Cheers,
Med





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