> On Aug 17, 2018, at 11:29 AM, Frank H. Ellenberger 
> <frank.h.ellenber...@gmail.com> wrote:
> 
> Am 16.08.2018 um 20:37 schrieb David T. via gnucash-devel:
>> Hello,
>> 
>> I was reviewing the Wiki today to try to figure out where a page on the SQL 
>> formats might get attached, and I noticed a change to the Glossary section 
>> that makes for awkward English.
>> 
>> As currently entered, the section reads:
>> 
>> Above GnuCash Tutorial and Concepts Guide includes a comprehensive Glossary: 
>> [https://www.gnucash.org/docs/v2.6/C/gnucash-guide/gnc-gloss.html Released] 
>> or [https://code.gnucash.org/docs/C/gnucash-guide/gnc-gloss.html Maintainer] 
>> version.
>> 
>> However, it used to say:
>> 
>> The GnuCash Tutorial and Concepts Guide includes a comprehensive Glossary: 
>> [https://www.gnucash.org/docs/v2.6/C/gnucash-guide/gnc-gloss.html Released] 
>> or [https://code.gnucash.org/docs/C/gnucash-guide/gnc-gloss.html Maintainer] 
>> version.
>> 
>> I would like to ask that someone with edit permissions on the wiki home page 
>> to please change the word “Above” back to “The” to make the section read 
>> more idiomatically.
>> 
>> David T.
> 
> IMHO it is also bad style to have:
> The Tutorial and Concepts Guide - an in-depth guide to the concepts.
> :
> The GnuCash Tutorial and Concepts Guide includes a comprehensive
> Glossary: Released or Maintainer version.
> 

We differ in our opinion here. I stand by my recommendation.

David

> ~Frank
> <pEpkey.asc>

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