Hi, > Looking over your changes, > > + The GDM greeter program displays a panel docked at the bottom > of the screen > + which provides additional functionality. When a user is selected, > the > + panel allows the user to select which session, language, and > keyboard layout > + to use when logging in. The panel also contains an area for > login services > + to leave status icons. Some example status icons include a > battery icon > + for current battery usage, and an icon for enabling > accessibility features. > + The greeter program also provides buttons which allow the > user to shutdown or > > You probably want to mention that the selected keyboard layout is also > used in the login session, which is important when trying to enter > your password. > > + When enabled, it displays all users which > + are available on the local system (all users defined in the > + /etc/passwd file) > > Here you perpaps want to clarify "excluding local system accounts, > such as 'ftp' ". > Or maybe that is obvious ? > > + GDM allows multiple users to be logged in at the same time. After > one > + user is logged in, additional, users can log in via the User Switcher > + on the GNOME Panel, or from the "Switch User" button in Lock > Screen dialog > + of GNOME Screensaver. The active session can be changed back > and forth using > + the same mechanism. > > Might want to add here that the 'User Switcher' is an applet that is > installed by gdm, and which can be added to the panel if it has not > been put there already by the default panel configuration. Thanks for the review. I've added changes to address your recommendations.
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