Martin Ågren <martin.ag...@gmail.com> writes: >> +Emacs's own support for Git got better than what was offered by these >> +modules, or was superseded by popular 3rd-party Git modes such as >> +Magit. > > This somehow reads like "Emacs's own support ... was superseded ...". > Maybe that's what you mean, but i'm not sure. Perhaps s/, was superseded > by/. There are also/.
I think "There are also" is way better. If we really want to sy superseded, perhaps "The features these modules offered were superseded by Emacs's own support in VC mode, and popular third-party Git modes e.g. Magit" is what we can say.
