From: "Marc Branchaud" <marcn...@xiplink.com>
On 2016-08-12 03:07 AM, Philip Oakley wrote:
Signed-off-by: Philip Oakley <philipoak...@iee.org>
---
new
Cc: Jakub Narębski <jna...@gmail.com>
https://public-inbox.org/git/578E4F4A.2020708%40gmail.com/
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Documentation/revisions.txt | 3 ++-
1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 1 deletion(-)
diff --git a/Documentation/revisions.txt b/Documentation/revisions.txt
index 3da0083..0b5044d 100644
--- a/Documentation/revisions.txt
+++ b/Documentation/revisions.txt
@@ -281,7 +281,8 @@ for naming a set that is formed by a commit and its
parent commits.
The 'r1{caret}@' notation means all parents of 'r1'.
-'r1{caret}!' includes commit 'r1' but excludes all of its parents.
+'r1{caret}!' notation includes commit 'r1' but excludes all of its
parents.
This sentence should start with "The".
Accepted. I'd simply split the the previous text, so the nice run-on effect
it initially had has been lost.
+This is the single commit 'r1', if standalone.
That reads awkwardly to me. Perhaps
By itself, this notation denotes the single commit 'r1'.
Like it. I'd toyed wth quite a few variants. It's jsut a case of finding the
nicest one;-)
?
M.
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Philip
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