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Change subject: doc/manuals: add overview, document running and configuration
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Patch Set 5:

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File README.md:

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PS4, Line 131: `make install` deploys a complete ERTS release together with a 
convenience
> the edits in this line until the end of this section don't seem like 
> improvements to me, it just add […]
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File doc/manuals/chapters/overview.adoc:

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PS4, Line 9: , i.e. radio base stations
> seems unnecessary, people reading this should be familiar with what an eNodeB 
> is, so I suggest to re […]
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PS4, Line 38: ----
> instead of such ascii art diagrams, we typically use graphviz graphs in 
> manuals: https://gitea. […]
I tend to have problems with graphviz placing the graph elements randomly. I 
did my best here and (at least in 
https://dreampuf.github.io/GraphvizOnline/?engine=dot) the new diagram looks 
good.


File doc/manuals/chapters/running.adoc:

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PS4, Line 32:   Useful for testing new features or bug fixes before they are 
formally released.
> Given that this is project specific documentation, I would remove above block 
> starting with "Two pac […]
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PS4, Line 107: Running `make install` (typically as root, or with `DESTDIR` set 
for
> This is very verbose. […]
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PS4, Line 128: ==== The `osmo-s1gw` Bootstrap Script
> This is also very verbose. […]
I see no problem with explaining what the bootstrap script does and including 
the help message here. Especially given that osmo-s1gw is currently the only 
project that installs a release package and brings a bootstrap script (others 
install a escript instead). And the arguments of `osmo-s1gw.sh` are unlikely to 
be added/modified often.


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PS4, Line 198:   Wireshark and are tagged with the application name `OsmoS1GW`.
> why is this worth mentioning? " and are tagged with the application name 
> `OsmoS1GW`. […]
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