swift 13/04/07 13:25:29 Modified: power-management-guide.xml Log: Update wording in powermanagement guide, makes sentences a bit more readable. Thanks to Jose Fournier for suggesting this
Revision Changes Path 1.53 xml/htdocs/doc/en/power-management-guide.xml file : http://sources.gentoo.org/viewvc.cgi/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/power-management-guide.xml?rev=1.53&view=markup plain: http://sources.gentoo.org/viewvc.cgi/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/power-management-guide.xml?rev=1.53&content-type=text/plain diff : http://sources.gentoo.org/viewvc.cgi/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/power-management-guide.xml?r1=1.52&r2=1.53 Index: power-management-guide.xml =================================================================== RCS file: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/power-management-guide.xml,v retrieving revision 1.52 retrieving revision 1.53 diff -u -r1.52 -r1.53 --- power-management-guide.xml 14 Jan 2013 06:19:27 -0000 1.52 +++ power-management-guide.xml 7 Apr 2013 13:25:29 -0000 1.53 @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ <?xml version='1.0' encoding="UTF-8"?> <!DOCTYPE guide SYSTEM "/dtd/guide.dtd"> -<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/power-management-guide.xml,v 1.52 2013/01/14 06:19:27 nightmorph Exp $ --> +<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/power-management-guide.xml,v 1.53 2013/04/07 13:25:29 swift Exp $ --> <guide> <title>Power Management Guide</title> @@ -21,8 +21,8 @@ <!-- See http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/2.5 --> <license/> -<version>7</version> -<date>2013-01-13</date> +<version>8</version> +<date>2013-04-07</date> <chapter> <title>Introduction</title> @@ -321,20 +321,24 @@ <ul> <li> - <e>Battery</e>, in the configuration files using the <c>BATT_</c> prefix, is - active when the system is running on battery power + <e>Battery</e>, which is active when the system is running on battery power; + the configuration files use the <c>BATT_</c> prefix for settings related to + this state </li> <li> - <e>AC</e>, in the configuration files using the <c>AC_</c> prefix, is active - when the system is running on AC power + <e>AC</e>, which is active when the system is running on AC power; + the configuration files use the <c>AC_</c> prefix for settings related to + this state </li> <li> - <e>Laptop Mode</e>, in the configuration files using the <c>LM_</c> prefix, - is active when <e>laptop mode</e> is enabled + <e>Laptop Mode</e>, which is active when <e>laptop mode</e> is enabled; + the configuration files use the <c>LM_</c> prefix for settings related to + this state </li> <li> - <e>No Laptop Mode</e>, in the configuration files using the <c>NOLM_</c> - prefix, is active when <e>laptop mode</e> is disabled + <e>No Laptop Mode</e>, which is active when <e>laptop mode</e> is disabled; + the configuration files use the <c>NOLM_</c> prefix for settings related to + this state </li> </ul>