The first paragraph resembles more of a personal blog than a news item. You should be able to passivize it. The first sentence also goes beyond 72 characters.
https://www.gentoo.org/glep/glep-0042.html#news-item-body -- juippis
The first paragraph resembles more of a personal blog than a news item. You should be able to passivize it. The first sentence also goes beyond 72 characters.
https://www.gentoo.org/glep/glep-0042.html#news-item-body -- juippis