Hi, Philip Webb <purs...@ca.inter.net>:
> 090520 Petteri Räty wrote: > >> A lot has changed from Baselayout version 1.x to 2.0.0, so all > >> users should take a look at the upgrade guide found at > >> http://www.gentoo.org/doc/en/openrc-migration.xml > >> to not break their systems. You will likely see an update of > >> sys-apps/baselayout in the near future: After installing, please > >> follow the upgrade guide and do not reboot your system meanwhile. > > Would this be better with > > - to not break > > - in order not to break > > "in order not to break" is clearer & better English. Ok thanks for the clarification. > >> After installing, please > >> follow the upgrade guide and do not reboot your system meanwhile. > > How does this sound: > >> After installing, please don't reboot your system > >> before following the guide because there's a risk > >> of not being able to boot properly with the old configuration > >> files. > > How about "after installing version 2.0.0 , DO NOT REBOOT YOUR SYSTEM > until you have followed the instructions in the upgrade guide. > Otherwise, there's a risk you won't be able to reboot properly, > as some of the old configuration files will still be in effect". Thanks for your contribution, I went with a mixture of Peterri's and your proposal. V-Li -- Christian Faulhammer, Gentoo Lisp project <URL:http://www.gentoo.org/proj/en/lisp/>, #gentoo-lisp on FreeNode <URL:http://gentoo.faulhammer.org/>
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