On Tue, 12 Jul 2005 08:48:50 -0400
Philip Webb <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:

> As someone who has never used MySQL, but might want to in future,
> your help doc looks very useful: thanks for your efforts.

Not a problem.
 
> It does need running thro' a spell-checker & a careful proof-reading,
> which is always easier for someone else than for the author himself.

Yah, I know, the docs-team makes fun of me daily for it ;p.
 
> Someone has already pointed out that it's 'Structured', not 'Standard'.
> under '[code list] 1.4', why do we need a root password ?
>   are you not setting this up as a user ? eg if I use MySQL,
>   it will be to manage a large database of urban transit information,
>   which I will do entirely inside my desktop machine
>   with no access to other users or to the Internet [ok: I see Sect 4 below];

Fixed, init script does, actual admin login doesn't

> at the beginning of Sect 2 , you have 'promt';

Fixed

> below '2.1', you don't explain what database 'mysql' is for;

Don't see exactly where this is in reference to.

> below '2.3', "let's us know" sb [should be] "lets us know";

Fixed

> under 'Creating the tables', it looks very much like a spreadsheet:
>   perhaps you could point out the parallels;
>   can you import data directly from a spreadsheet like Open Calc ?

Not sure if I quite understand this corectly.  Most spredsheet programs save to 
comma seperated files, which MySQL file loading requires tab seperated files.

> below '3.2', "most simplistic" sb "simplest" or "most straightforward";

Fixed

> under '3.6', you should explain that you are using 'insert into'
>   to insert a new record (if that's what it does), not arbitrary data;

Fixed

> under '3.7', "seperated" sb "separated" (other instances below):
>   it's a trap for anyone who missed out on Latin at school (smile);

I was told that by someone else :P
Fixed

> under '3.10', you need to expand your explanation:
>   "if you paste information <into your infile>";

Fixed that + another "seperation"

> under '3.11', "comprimised" sb "compromised":
>   3.11-12 looks a bit out of place: perhaps move it below with a cross-ref ?

Fixed

> under '3.14', why do the columns not line up in your examples ?
>   is this a deficiency in MySQL or a result of your desktop set-up ?

not sure what you mean there, they look fine to me

> under '3.16', "priveleges" & "privleges" sb "privileges":
>   this recurs several times below (grimace);

Twice in one paragraph, nice ;p
Fixed

> at the beginning of Sect 4 , the point about root versus users is explained:
>   this sb mentioned briefly right at the top in Sect 1 ;

Actually, it's a root mysql account, not the system root, I made a note about 
that.

> under '4.3', i would write "quitting", but perhaps US-speak is "quiting";

Fixed

> under '4.8', is "admin" the same as "root" ? -- this needs explanation.

Clarified
 
> I've skipped over all the stuff about user privileges,
> as it looks as if my own usage would be as "root" in the MySQL sense (above).

Ok
 
> One final point you don't mention: is there a GUI front-end for MySQL ?
> I'm sure there is, so which one(s) do you recommend ?
> For myself, I'm happy to use CLI where it's simplest,
> but it looks as if a GUI would save a lot of typing injuries here.

Adding a section on that right now...  I'll post the new updated page in just a 
bit.
 
> HTH : it's meant to be picky (smile).

Sure, sure, just take away my freedom!!! ;)

> Your doc looks very helpful, but needs a bit of polishing & expansion.
> 
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