typo - "You work on imprving the website" I'd truncate the incubation time. "You have been incubating for 8.699999999999998 months" is a little unnecessary. :)
It feels a lot like a black box. I'd say two things are missing: Graphics/metrics, and story. Metrics - Maybe something like a "strength" indicator as displayed in video games, across the available metrics, or even just a count. Story - I feel like I'm doing things randomly, for the most part. Discussing with mentors gives some feedback sometimes, but really I'm just randomly clicking, and that doesn't make for the best incubated project. :) Maybe some of the Twinery comments could be displayed, or the mentor output displayed in a div on the page without having to click there separately? Also - you're missing filing incubator reports, I think? On Mon, Apr 3, 2023 at 3:07 PM Justin Mclean <jus...@classsoftware.com> wrote: > Hi, > > A work in progress, so there may be spelling errors and bugs. Just like in > real life, the game ends when you stop playing it but things can happen to > you along the way. > > http://incubator-game.s3-website-us-east-1.amazonaws.com > > Made using an open source engine https://twinery.org, the output is > compatible with the Apache license if anyone was wondering. > > Feedback welcome. > > Kind Regards, > Justin > --------------------------------------------------------------------- > To unsubscribe, e-mail: general-unsubscr...@incubator.apache.org > For additional commands, e-mail: general-h...@incubator.apache.org > >
