+1 from me too. I did some wordsmithing but not certain how that works properly in Google Docs in terms of how changes are made evident for review, etc.
- Dennis PS: When I go back and review, I see that I needed to leave more highlights or comments to indicate places where I made adjustments. (Maybe a wiki would be better, so there is a modification history?) > -----Original Message----- > From: Bertrand Delacretaz [mailto:bdelacre...@apache.org] > Sent: Monday, October 19, 2015 01:29 > To: Incubator General <general@incubator.apache.org> > Subject: Re: Starting from the other end > > Hi, > > On Thu, Oct 15, 2015 at 8:55 PM, Ted Dunning <ted.dunn...@gmail.com> > wrote: > > ...The first step (What Apache Incubator Does) can be edited at > > > https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dxUVHGWcj83wIVnskYL7iM7PiiScLLNS4HjG > Ha6LsgA/edit?usp=sharing ... > > I like that. > > Combined with a set of commented links that point to good examples of > the various phases and transitions (proposal, acceptance, etc.) I > think this could replace a large part of the Incubator documentation. > > I don't have any specific changes to request at this point, I think > the current draft is good enough to move to our wiki or website. > > -Bertrand > > --------------------------------------------------------------------- > To unsubscribe, e-mail: general-unsubscr...@incubator.apache.org > For additional commands, e-mail: general-h...@incubator.apache.org --------------------------------------------------------------------- To unsubscribe, e-mail: general-unsubscr...@incubator.apache.org For additional commands, e-mail: general-h...@incubator.apache.org
