On 10/13/07, Robert Burrell Donkin <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > On 10/13/07, ant elder <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > > On 10/13/07, Robert Burrell Donkin <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > > <snip> > > > So bringing together all the comments so far gives something like: > > > > ...establish a Project Management Committee charged with the > > creation and maintenance of open-source software that simplifies > > the development, deployment and management of distributed > > applications composed of independently acting, loosely coupled, > > linguistically hetrogenous components connected using any of a > > wide range of communication technologies. This software will implement > > relevant open standards including, but not limited to, standards defined > > by the OASIS OpenCSA group, for distribution at no charge to the public. > > the concatination makes last sentence is a little ambiguous. might be > better to either start another sentence
it's wonderfully ironic that my grammar critique is not a sentence (or at least, not in english) - robert --------------------------------------------------------------------- To unsubscribe, e-mail: [EMAIL PROTECTED] For additional commands, e-mail: [EMAIL PROTECTED]
