On 9/18/06, robert burrell donkin <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
http://incubator.apache.org/guides/proposal.html is currently a draft document. i think that it's strong enough to push towards promoting it (and putting it in the indexes).
+1.
1 presentation (is the way the content presented easily digested and understandable?)
Two small comments for your consideration. First, what about a TOC at the beginning that links to the other sections of the documents? That way people have an idea of the sections - but this document is long enough that a TOC is nice to have. The other thing that I would find helpful is to change the color of the examples and commentary. They are way too similar. Maybe one of them should be boxed with a dark-color background? It's a minor nit, but I think if we can make the distinction greater (the font difference isn't enough, IMO), it'd be easier to understand. (Actually, if I look at it, I think you may have tried with a light-blue and white? If so, the color difference is too subtle.) Even with these minor nits, this is certainly good enough to link from the main page. Thanks so much - this is going to be a great help! -- justin --------------------------------------------------------------------- To unsubscribe, e-mail: [EMAIL PROTECTED] For additional commands, e-mail: [EMAIL PROTECTED]
