[policy neutral] improvement to wording in ongoing activities and add link to 
referenced section
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                 Key: INCUBATOR-45
                 URL: http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/INCUBATOR-45
             Project: Incubator
          Issue Type: Improvement
            Reporter: Robert Burrell Donkin
         Assigned To: Robert Burrell Donkin


improvement to wording in ongoing activities and add link to referenced section.

It is hoped that these changes are policy neutral.

Index: site-author/incubation/Incubation_Policy.xml
===================================================================
--- site-author/incubation/Incubation_Policy.xml        (revision 437587)
+++ site-author/incubation/Incubation_Policy.xml        (working copy)
@@ -303,10 +303,12 @@
      </section>
       <section id="Ongoing+Activities">
         <title>Ongoing Activities</title>
-        <p>The progress of a Podling SHALL be tracked in a "project status" 
file
-which SHALL be stored in the incubator/site-author/projects/
-repository and so become available at
-
+        <p>The progress of a Podling SHALL be tracked in a "project status" 
document.
+This SHALL be stored in
+<a 
href='http://svn.apache.org/repos/asf/incubator/public/trunk/site-author/projects/'>
+http://svn.apache.org/repos/asf/incubator/public/trunk/site-author/projects/
+</a>
+and so become available at
           <a 
href="http://incubator.apache.org/projects/";>http://incubator.apache.org/projects/
 </a>
         </p>
@@ -316,21 +318,16 @@
         <ul>
           <li>status of setup tasks;
 </li>
-          <li>all exit criteria (see section
-
-            <em>Exiting the Incubator
-</em>below);
-
+          <li>all exit criteria (see
+            <a href='Exiting+the+Incubator'>Exiting the Incubator</a>);
           </li>
           <li>status of Podling against exit criteria.
 </li>
         </ul>
-        <p>The Mentor MUST ensure that the "project status" document is up to
-date at all times. See
-
+        <p>The Mentors MUST ensure that the "project status" document is up to
+date at all times. See these
           <a 
href="../guides/website.html#Edit+your+project+status+report">instructions
 </a>.
-
         </p>
       </section>
       <section id="Review+of+Activity">
Index: site-publish/incubation/Incubation_Policy.html
===================================================================
--- site-publish/incubation/Incubation_Policy.html      (revision 437587)
+++ site-publish/incubation/Incubation_Policy.html      (working copy)
@@ -396,10 +396,12 @@
    <a name="Ongoing+Activities">Ongoing Activities</a>
 </h3>
 <div class="section-content">
-<p>The progress of a Podling SHALL be tracked in a "project status" file
-which SHALL be stored in the incubator/site-author/projects/
-repository and so become available at
-
+<p>The progress of a Podling SHALL be tracked in a "project status" document.
+This SHALL be stored in
+<a 
href="http://svn.apache.org/repos/asf/incubator/public/trunk/site-author/projects/";>
+http://svn.apache.org/repos/asf/incubator/public/trunk/site-author/projects/
+</a>
+and so become available at
           <a 
href="http://incubator.apache.org/projects/";>http://incubator.apache.org/projects/
 </a>
         </p>
@@ -409,21 +411,16 @@
 <ul>
           <li>status of setup tasks;
 </li>
-          <li>all exit criteria (see section
-
-            <em>Exiting the Incubator
-</em>below);
-
+          <li>all exit criteria (see
+            <a href="Exiting+the+Incubator">Exiting the Incubator</a>);
           </li>
           <li>status of Podling against exit criteria.
 </li>
         </ul>
-<p>The Mentor MUST ensure that the "project status" document is up to
-date at all times. See
-
+<p>The Mentors MUST ensure that the "project status" document is up to
+date at all times. See these
           <a 
href="../guides/website.html#Edit+your+project+status+report">instructions
 </a>.
-
         </p>
 </div>
 <h3>


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