[policy neutral] consistent use of term
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Key: INCUBATOR-42
URL: http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/INCUBATOR-42
Project: Incubator
Issue Type: Improvement
Components: policy
Reporter: Robert Burrell Donkin
Assigned To: Robert Burrell Donkin
The patch tightens the prose and uses language more consistently with the rest
of the revisions.
Index: site-author/incubation/Incubation_Policy.xml
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--- site-author/incubation/Incubation_Policy.xml (revision 437587)
+++ site-author/incubation/Incubation_Policy.xml (working copy)
@@ -273,13 +273,15 @@
</p>
<section id="Setting+Up+a+New+Podling">
<title>Setting Up a New Podling</title>
- <p>Once the Podling and Mentor have been accepted by the Incubator PMC,
-the following activities SHOULD take place :
+ <p>
+Once a proposal has been <a href='#Acceptance+By+Incubator'>accepted</a>
+and the podling <a href='#Creation+of+Podling'>created</a>
+a <a href='#Mentor'>Mentor</a> SHOULD initiate the creation of:
</p>
<ul>
- <li>creation of "project status" page (see below);</li>
- <li>creation of mailing lists;</li>
- <li>creation of SVN-space;</li>
+ <li>the <a href='#Ongoing+Activities'>project status</a> page;</li>
+ <li>the mailing lists;</li>
+ <li>the repository space;</li>
</ul>
<ul>
<li>Incubator PMC mandating a helper Mentor</li>
Index: site-publish/incubation/Incubation_Policy.html
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--- site-publish/incubation/Incubation_Policy.html (revision 437587)
+++ site-publish/incubation/Incubation_Policy.html (working copy)
@@ -364,13 +364,15 @@
<a name="Setting+Up+a+New+Podling">Setting Up a New Podling</a>
</h3>
<div class="section-content">
-<p>Once the Podling and Mentor have been accepted by the Incubator PMC,
-the following activities SHOULD take place :
+<p>
+Once a proposal has been <a href="#Acceptance+By+Incubator">accepted</a>
+and the podling <a href="#Creation+of+Podling">created</a>
+a <a href="#Mentor">Mentor</a> SHOULD initiate the creation of:
</p>
<ul>
- <li>creation of "project status" page (see below);</li>
- <li>creation of mailing lists;</li>
- <li>creation of SVN-space;</li>
+ <li>the <a href="#Ongoing+Activities">project status</a> page;</li>
+ <li>the mailing lists;</li>
+ <li>the repository space;</li>
</ul>
<ul>
<li>Incubator PMC mandating a helper Mentor</li>
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