Document: draft-ietf-tvr-schedule-yang Title: YANG Data Model for Scheduled Attributes Reviewer: Peter Yee Review result: Ready with Nits
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://wiki.ietf.org/en/group/gen/GenArtFAQ>. Document: draft-ietf-tvr-schedule-yang-08 Reviewer: Peter Yee Review Date: 2026-03-02 IETF LC End Date: 2026-03-03 IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat Summary: This draft covers YANG modules for use in the management of networks where scheduled events may need to be expressed and factored into thing like routing decisions. The document is mostly YANG, which I have not attempted to verify. There are very minor nits that could be fixed prior to submission to the RFC Editor. [Ready with nits] Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: Page 1, Abstract, 1st sentence: delete the comma after “modules”. Page 2, Overview, 1st paragraph, 2nd sentence: change “ReST” to “REST”. Page 18, section 6, 5th paragraph, 2nd sentence: consider insert “the” before “control plane” and “data plane” or changing both of those to be plural. That just feels less awkward to read to me, but the sense of the sentence is fine without modification. Page 19, section 7, 3rd paragraph, 3rd sentence: change “There” to “These”. _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list -- [email protected] To unsubscribe send an email to [email protected]
