I fixed this in the intro with a slightly thinner version as noted. Please check and let me know if it is sufficient. It’s in the newly posted -11 version.
Joe — Dr. Joe Touch, temporal epistemologist www.strayalpha.com > On Aug 11, 2025, at 6:18 AM, Gorry Fairhurst <[email protected]> wrote: > > On 08/08/2025 20:22, Dale R. Worley wrote: >> [email protected] <mailto:[email protected]> (Dale R. Worley) writes: >>> - In section 4, there is much discussion of PExIDs but you have to read >>> the whole section very carefully to find out what they *are*. I >>> suggest that the section start with a paragraph that explains that: >>> >>> A PExID is a 32-bit unsigned integer encoded in network standard byte >>> order. It is used in an experimental protocol by being prepended to >>> the protocol's transport data, in front of each separate message or >>> byte stream. PExIDs MUST be registered in the registry created by >>> this document. >> Hmmm, indeed, why not put that paragraph in the introduction, so someone >> reading the introduction can learn what a PExID is, not just the idea? >> >> Dale > I also think a possibly slightly "thinner" version of the above text would be > a really nice addition as a part of the intro, where the PExID is first > mentioned! > > I'd also encourage this to provide an expansion of the PExID term when it is > first used. > > ... although, I think the current text probably needs to remain describe the > normative requirements presented in section 4. > > Best wishes, > > Gorry > > >
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