Document: draft-ietf-pim-p2mp-policy-ping
Title: P2MP Policy Ping
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review result: Ready with Nits

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Document: draft-ietf-pim-p2mp-policy-ping-11
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2025-07-13
IETF LC End Date: 2025-07-14
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC.

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:
Asbtract: 
SR Point-to-Multipoint (P2MP) -suggestion->Segment Routing Point-to-Multipoint 
(SR P2MP) 
"via YANG modles"-->"via YANG models"

3.1.1. "Applicablitiry"-->"Applicability"
4. "Fu, thermore,"-->"Furthermore, "
8. draft-ietf-pim-sr-p2mp-policy latest is dated July 2025 not Oct 2019


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