Document: draft-ietf-sidrops-rpki-crl-numbers Title: Handling of Resource Public Key Infrastructure (RPKI) Certificate Revocation List (CRL) Number Extensions Reviewer: Peter Yee Review result: Ready with Issues
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://wiki.ietf.org/en/group/gen/GenArtFAQ>. Document: draft-ietf-sidrops-rpki-crl-numbers-04 Reviewer: Peter Yee Review Date: 2025-04-06 IETF LC End Date: 2025-04-03 IESG Telechat date: 2025-05-22 Summary: This document changes RFC 6487 so that the CRL Number extension is essentially considered superfluous. There are some minor issues in the document that could be addressed. [Ready with issues.] Major issues: None Minor issues: Page 3, section 1.3, 3rd bullet item: Erratum 3205 adds the text “The extensions mentioned above MUST NOT appear more than once each” to the paragraph in question. The update of that paragraph occurs in section 3.1 of this draft. Nowhere in that paragraph does it make any mention of multiple occurrences of CRL Number. It does add new strictures on checking CRL Number (non-critical and less than or equal to 2^159-1), but neither of those seemingly has anything to do with multiple occurrences, so I am no unsure how this draft has integrated that erratum. Page 5, 2nd bullet item prior to section 3.2: what happens if the CRL Number doesn’t meet these criteria? Nits/editorial comments: Page 6, 1st paragraph, 1st sentence: change “determinining” to “determining”. Change “resouce" to “resource”. _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list -- gen-art@ietf.org To unsubscribe send an email to gen-art-le...@ietf.org
