Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments.
For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://wiki.ietf.org/en/group/gen/GenArtFAQ>. Document: draft-ietf-tls-esni-23 Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review Date: 2025-03-18 IETF LC End Date: 2025-03-13 IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat Summary:A well written document with some minor nits that are easily addressed. Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: fields, such as the ALPN list [RFC7301]. Co-located servers with SB> ALPN needs expanding on first use. ======== or they send a GREASE ECH SB> I believe that GREASE is an acronym and should be expanded. ======== (see Section 2 of [DNS-TERMS]). SB> ID-NITS identifies the following concern: -- Obsolete informational reference (is this intentional?): RFC 8499 (ref. 'DNS-TERMS') (Obsoleted by RFC 9499) Should the reference be changed? ========= Note that, if the cookie includes a key name, analogous to Section 4 of [RFC5077], this may leak information if different backend servers issue cookies with different key names at the time of the connection. SB> From ID-NITS -- Obsolete informational reference (is this intentional?): RFC 5077 (Obsoleted by RFC 8446) Should the reference be changed? _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list -- gen-art@ietf.org To unsubscribe send an email to gen-art-le...@ietf.org
